| "The High School Years: Freshman Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: babie blue On: March 02, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh! U hafta write more! So is Bulma going to move back? *sniff* i hope so!
l0l! Well i really really liked this fic!
Update soon?
~babie~blue~ |
Reviewed By: Angel On: January 11, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I like your fanfic. The reason my 'Enjoyment factor' is low, is because Bulma wasn't in it. Will you put her in the story some time, or is this a 'non-Bulma' fanfic? I like B/V's best, so I would just ask. |
Reviewed By: Souley On: December 17, 2002 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far but I really liked the other one a lot better. Why did you decide to change it? There were also lot of gramical errors but that's not a big deal. I would like to see more though. |
Reviewed By: Tom On: December 15, 2002 01:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the originality/creativeness of your story. I hope you continue it. It's fun to read. |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 01:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I didn't spell Gokou wrong...that's how his name is spelled in Japan...Son Gokou. |
Reviewed By: Aqua_Fresh_Ali [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 14:36 CST
Comment/Review:
that was good but i'd like to say that you spelled Goku wrong! LOL
Aqua_Fresh_Ali |
Reviewed By: chibi 'geta On: November 26, 2002 19:56 CST
Comment/Review:
write more please. i want to find out what happens.
ps. dont put in ash inlest u make a fool out of him |
