| "vegetas night out" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 16:49 CST
Comment/Review:
And i's need to be capitalized when some one talks about themselfs like "I have a..." whatever you get it. |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 16:47 CST
Comment/Review:
You didn't capitalize names or put periodes or have camas in the story. The story was weird. |
