| "Missing Piece" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Sky Rat (nli) On: January 21, 2004 15:37 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really lovely. It looks like you've abandoned it though. Please continue?
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Reviewed By: CaT On: June 09, 2003 09:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
ahhhhhhhh! i wuv it! must. continue!!! continue continue continue continue continue! it's soooo cute! i really like the story, it's funny =^^= *snickers* mom and dad. hehehe!!! that was THE BEST paragraph of the year i sware! so keep writing, i really love the story! =^^=v |
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww this is sweet but it's hinting at some sad parts to come? *sniffles* They deserve happiness dun make them really really sad. Oh! And please please continue.... please? Did I mention please? I'm seriously enjoying this fic and I hope you don't let it die at chapter two... |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 08, 2003 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*ssssssiiiiggghhhhhhhhhh*.....this fic is Sooooooooooo Beeeeauutifulllll,...and FFuunnnyyyyyyy too,...with a touch of angst mix-in,....i love ken POV,...the way he desscribes his growing feelings towards omi is SSSoooooooooo SSSSwwwwweeettttt,...*sssiiigghhhhhhh*.....and aya and yohji brief appearance makes it much more sweeter,...and humourous,...i love that scene when aya and yohji cought them in bed,....*snicker*....i lough untill i'm almost fall's off my com chair,....it's SSSSoooooooo DDDaaamnnnnnn,...FFFFuuunnnyyyy,....*LOL*....^_^.....please continue soon,...and keep-up the good work kay,....till yer-next chapter,..JAAAAAAA and GAAAANBATEE-NEEE!!^_~!! |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 18:59 CST
Comment/Review:
This is very sweet so far. I like reading stuff from Ken's perspective and KenxOmi is such a cute pairing. I hope things turn out all right in the end. Post again soon!
~Midori^_~ |
