| "Who Says We're Too Young To Love" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: BlueDietyx29 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG U HAVE TO FINISH THIS PLEASE!!!!! *gets on my knees and grovels* PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAASEEEE I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!! ITS THE BEST THING SINCE THE TV WAS INVENTED!!! (yes i have problems ^_^) |
Reviewed By: Megz On: September 26, 2002 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! Can't wait for the rest of the chapters!!! |
Reviewed By: seanmc525 On: August 12, 2002 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When will the next chapter be out?I've been coming back to this story every day since June-18-2002!!!Cuz I really want to know what happens next and I cant wait for it to come out!!!!hehe....Ü |
Reviewed By: darkdiva618 On: August 12, 2002 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good.I knew that you were a good writer but i never thought you would come up with this story!!! I really hope your gunna make some more of the dbz vegeta and bulma get-together stories! Please E-mail me at darkdiva618@netscape.net My msn s/n is SJPratte@prodigy.net My aol s/n is DivaDynamite618 |
Reviewed By: darkdiva618 On: August 12, 2002 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good.I knew that you were a good writer but i never thought you would come up with this story!!!I really hope your gunna make some more of the dbz vegeta and bulma get-together stories!Please E-mail me atdarkdiva618@netscape.netMy msn s/n is SJPratte@prodigy.netMy aol s/n is DivaDynamite618 |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2002 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My review above made NO sense what so ever so let me say it again. This was a good chapter. In the begginging they were speaking like rappers some times but it looks like it's stopped now. So please post more soon! |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: January 30, 2002 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this was a chapter, in the first few the way they talked was weired. But now it's great post more soon! |
Reviewed By: jsw097 On: January 16, 2002 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story I think is a good one cause it deals with things that a regular dbz story won't(except for gohan's school thing) and that is highschool, and picturing chi-chi, vegeta and all of them in school. |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 04, 2002 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say you've got a sense of humor. I really enjoyed reading this nice piece of work. I can't wait to readd the next upcoming chpters. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2001 05:49 CST
Comment/Review:
goodness! do you have the fanfic completed on some other site? could you please send me the url? im going insane! i can't stand being left hanging! PLEASE post the rest up! it's such a cute fic. :) |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel On: November 25, 2001 14:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Man I cant belive im still waitin
please write more soon |
Reviewed By: Destiny On: September 14, 2001 21:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
don't worry if ppl don't email you or comment usually it b/c they don't really think they need to but i'm commenting great story your on my favs oh and please continue i love this story. |
Reviewed By: Sutremaine On: September 15, 2001 08:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
New speaker= new line. Sort that out and I'll read it. |
Reviewed By: J-9 On: September 23, 2001 13:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I cant wait till you make a new one I thought it is great so dont hold back on making new ones just yet |
Reviewed By: AngelKali On: September 24, 2001 21:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
i have to agree. it's great, but when a new person speaks, you leave a space and then a line. like this. "oh wow."
"Yeah I know."
That would make it a lot less cluttered and easier to read. |
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