| "Stationary Student Hail Hina" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: heh
Reviewed By: RN On: August 01, 2004 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one was actually kinda fun, unlike most lemons that are only fun to read when being M-stinged. I really liked how it all was written and I'd sure like to see something like this with another bunch of series.
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Reviewed By: Unholy Blaze On: May 02, 2004 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is a really funny and fun idea you had. But shouldn't Excel Saga also be one of the stated fanfictions used?
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Reviewed By: Keitaro22 On: March 12, 2004 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great fic i loved it pleae right a chapter where i get it on with Sarah please thank you bye
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Reviewed By: Altalen On: December 31, 2003 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this... i'm a freak, but i like pwps like when naru was fucked by that man... i like something like that and i really like this fic of yours write moe!
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: tm On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a word of advice to the last reviewer. Kitsune is Mitsune Konno's nickname, okay? And it's Mutsumi, not Mitsumi. Just clearing up things...
As for the story itself, it's a good parody. IT IS A PARODY, OK! A hentai one, but still parody. In a parody, OCC is a vital factor.
I liked it... |
Reviewed By: BlueBomber101 On: July 02, 2003 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I took a point off of spelling because you spelled capisce wrong.... |
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey tyrenol Have you read my fic yet? It's called love hina dark zero style! read and review |
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero On: March 20, 2003 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read chapters one through three on the greyarchive. after that i searched everywhere for the other chapters. I'd like to see one with Su though. Keep up the good work. |
