| "Unbreakable" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: aet On: November 03, 2003 05:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Strange - elsewhere I've seen up to chapter 11 of this fic, with the 12th apparently on the way. Have you decided not to update here anymore?
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Reviewed By: Jackie On: June 24, 2002 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a realy great story! I hope more chapters come out soon! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
right. Like what I read, even though it is just a little :hint hint: please write more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Ami On: December 30, 2001 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very cool story. I hope Bulma kicks Vegeta's ass! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Amy On: December 27, 2001 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read the rest of it! It's very cool! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: connie On: December 02, 2001 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey..very original idea!! so she wants nothing to do with him huh? well i can't wait to read about that!! *hint hint* |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: November 01, 2001 01:49 CST
Comment/Review:
you got writers block? i get it all the time, just chill, go for a long walk, do as much other work as you can, read other ppls fanfics to get ideas then hit to computer and write like youve never written b4, coz i wanna read your gear |
