| "Young Luv <3 <3" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: What happens next?
Reviewed By: Ally Diablo On: November 25, 2004 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the syle of writing but I've seen it before, some of the spelling and grammer is messed up, It's quiet creative but I've see another story with the sae concept. I was great to read but you need to get the chapeters out faster so ya
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Reviewed By: Fallen_angel On: June 22, 2003 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i really like this fic. but i had read others like it befor. it is so good i hate unfinished ones though so whoever wrote this when you finish it wrtie and give it to me please at Babs101887@aol.com k? |
Reviewed By: JadedMermaid [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 22:51 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE continue! I LOVE THIS FAN FIC!!!!! pLEASEx100000 I really like ur idea and your style.... |
Reviewed By: cinderella On: December 08, 2002 22:26 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHH! KEEP WRITING!!!!! seriously! It's awesome! I want more sap! ^________^ hehehe |
Reviewed By: Dryad Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 13:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, whoever deleted this fic before blows major goats. How would you like it if someone you didn't even know deleted YOUR crap! Huh? Huh!? THAT'S RIGHT!!! It may seem not that big of a deal, but just imagine this...you got the VERY first copy of a book that you poured your heart and soul into. Now see someone that you've never seen before take it out of your hands, wrench at the pages, and rip every last bit of it into little tiny pieces. YEAH, you just broke my freaking heart! I hope you feel horrible for doing what you did, asshole, because you're an insult to your own GRANDMOTHER!!!!!! I HOPE YOU GO TO HELL WHEN YOU DIE SO THAT YOU CAN DANCE WITH LUCIFER AND HAVE DEMONIC CRONIES STICK HOT POKERS UP YOUR BUTT!!!!!!!!!!!!
I AM DONE!
oh, btw, thanks for reviewing elise ^^ I'm planning to work on chapter ten real soon. LATER! |
Reviewed By: Elise On: November 27, 2002 20:53 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!!!! You can't get bored!!! I like your fic too much! And just because it took forever to post...well...at least it GOT posted AND written. Or maybe it should be the other way around....hhhhmmmmm....OH well, the point is that I LOVE YOUR FIC!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!
Elise |
