| "Truth or Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel_Star [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I can't wait! I'm dying! Please update! Oh, Make sure Ubb opes the door, Bra would kiss him and Goten would die of jealousy! Poor Panny, Bra and Marron ae very mean!
I think a way to show that the guys like the girs is making them jealous, and also make sure you let the girls jealous too!!
*Angel Star* |
Reviewed By: potti~mouth On: February 20, 2003 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm.10,10,10,10,10.what's there to explain?not much,the way i c it.dude-er,dudette-,I freakin' luv this fic!but i gots an idea.y don't u make some1 like yamucha or goku open the door?y'know, to make it totally ironic?the couples should end the way the majority thinks,in my opinion,BTW.(G/B,T/P,M/U)i can't think of any good dares,but once i get one,i'll R and R again,K?i played it B-4,but i didn't get given many good dares.the best was eat a dog pellet the size of my thumb, but that's something u don't c everyday in the Z world,huh?
U betta update,sistah,'cause i'm gonna make like 'sarbear' and lose my mind when i really had nothing to lose!
Phooey,that's even more pathetic on paper.
-Potti~mouth |
Reviewed By: sarbear On: February 16, 2003 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa.wuz that last kooky review MINE?oops.I must have.......nevermind.
I luv this fic!updateupdateupdate!!I'm losing my mind over here!
not that i had one to begin with.... |
Reviewed By: Sarbear (I'm also Jailbird,the other reviewer) On: February 08, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just gave it all tens,so I don't really need to explain why.
Anyway....
MAKE GOTEN OPEN THE DOOR!PLEASE MAKE HIM OPEN THE DOOR?
Uh...........yeah,anyway.
Dude......marron can be dared by bra to stand outside the boys' door and sing a corny song that says i luv u in it,and after scream,I LUV YOU UUBU!then run away.
P.S.:If u overlook the title u might find me to be a rather normal human being. |
Reviewed By: crystalgirl 1 On: February 01, 2003 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is the boom
write more |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is getting good so why didi you leave us hanging like that i want(no need) to know what happens |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UUUUUUURRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~!!!!!!!!! You write more. Damnit, you write more NOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story was soooooo cool. I don't even usually read non-yaoi or non x-tremly violent or mean stuff. Especally when the story dosen't have Vegeta in it. If you've done that good, then you'd better finish, BECAUSE I WANT TO KNOW JUST WHO IN THE HELL OPENED THAT DAMNED DOOR!!!!! Better not have been Goten. He's mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoever Bra kisses, can u make sure it's not Ubbu? |
Reviewed By: WonderBra [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 03:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though I've read a heap of stories using this idea, this is definitely one of the better ones - probably because you actually have some writing talent!
Although I'm a total B/G fan, I actually think that it should be Uub who opens the door, just to add a bit of an interesting twist. Apart from that, I agree with the previously nominated couples - being Bra/Goten, Uub/Marron and Pan/Trunks. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the most evil person on the face of this planet two end the second chapter like this! Hurry up and write!!!... Sorry, I'm just really exited about this. I really want to know who opened the door. |
Reviewed By: Yuffie lockheart On: December 14, 2002 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is maddd cool!! please write some more itz da shit!! |
Reviewed By: dOOR KNOWER On: December 10, 2002 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHO THE HELL OPENED THE DOOR! |
Reviewed By: Pia Bartolini On: December 05, 2002 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I've got a good dare for Marron....sing the song "that's amore" to Uub, while petting his hair and and just generally being cheesy to the max.....oh yeah, and someone has to get blackmail videotape. |
Reviewed By: yaselle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Good so far. Write more!!
I agree with stargirl from the pairing
Trunks/pan, ubuu/marron, bra/goten |
Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 05:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really funny!!!!
Please write more, it's really good!
B.J |
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