| "Together Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 01:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the lemon!! ^^
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWww!! THIS STORY IS GREAT!! I love it!!
The first lemon was great!! in a tree. Heh. Never thought of that one!! ^^
and the second chapter was superb!!
CONTINUE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: December 08, 2002 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey me again. I just read your story AGAIN. its so good! you have to continue soon! a.s.a.p! |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 03:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, pretty good you should continue with this story. One thing though (and please don't take this the wrong way) check some of your words before posting your chapters...I realise that in the first lines you meant to say Vegeta was always gentle but it has come out as genital - as in his manhood. Despite that (and it's no big thing - the word not Veggies "manhood") I really enjoyed it and would like to read more and soon!! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 27, 2002 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww that was sooo cute!!
You should definitly continue with this.
I really liked it, it was soo good!
YAY!!! |
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