| "Together Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 17:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
KKKKEPPPP THE CHAPYSS COMINGGG!!!!!!!!!!! Thank u for the lemon !! and shit Gokus has the Hvirus OH well Goodriddance!!!
Im kidding!!!
No Im not but anywhoo UPDatesoonnn!!!
later!
more lemon! |
Reviewed By: Kamikaze On: March 17, 2003 18:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, what a nice chapter. It was so sweet. As well as Veggie was...but well,in his own way he always is.^^ I like your story a lot and hope that you will continue it soon. But I donŽt want to hurry you. Take the time you need. IŽll waiting ^^ |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cut chapy i loved it please please please update soon!!!
If u can manage a lil lemon i 'll love u lots
Later! |
Reviewed By: quartz-princess On: February 06, 2003 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of what you said on chapter 9...
I WOULD LOVE TO! AND THAT WAY I COULD GO IN YOUR MARVELOUS FANFIC!!!!!!!!!
PLEEASEEEEEEEEE! I'LL DO WHATEVER YOU WANT!!!1 |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*curled up infront of the fire*
Write more. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: sango3112 On: February 03, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me like you should continue to write can't wait to ya update |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 22:07 CST
Comment/Review:
mmm nice lemon |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 21:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I don't think they finished their dinner. ha ha. Nice lemon. :) |
Reviewed By: star On: March 22, 2003 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cooooooooooooool i started reading this backon ff.net and i loved it low and behold theres more here please write more oh and by the way I don't give a damn that you can't spell your a great writer |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 22:54 CST
Comment/Review:
cool turn of events can't wait for the next one |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmm nice lemon chica |
Reviewed By: ashley On: December 31, 2002 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
verry good keep up the good work:) |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, you should definitly continue a.s.a.p. i need to know what happens next. great job so far^_^ |
Reviewed By: ashley On: December 22, 2002 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good very oringal |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: December 15, 2002 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
coolies keep going chica |
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