| "Together Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: sango3112 On: February 03, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me like you should continue to write can't wait to ya update |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 22:07 CST
Comment/Review:
mmm nice lemon |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 21:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I don't think they finished their dinner. ha ha. Nice lemon. :) |
Reviewed By: star On: March 22, 2003 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cooooooooooooool i started reading this backon ff.net and i loved it low and behold theres more here please write more oh and by the way I don't give a damn that you can't spell your a great writer |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 22:54 CST
Comment/Review:
cool turn of events can't wait for the next one |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmm nice lemon chica |
Reviewed By: ashley On: December 31, 2002 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
verry good keep up the good work:) |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, you should definitly continue a.s.a.p. i need to know what happens next. great job so far^_^ |
Reviewed By: ashley On: December 22, 2002 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good very oringal |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: December 15, 2002 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
coolies keep going chica |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 01:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the lemon!! ^^
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWww!! THIS STORY IS GREAT!! I love it!!
The first lemon was great!! in a tree. Heh. Never thought of that one!! ^^
and the second chapter was superb!!
CONTINUE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: December 08, 2002 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey me again. I just read your story AGAIN. its so good! you have to continue soon! a.s.a.p! |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 03:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, pretty good you should continue with this story. One thing though (and please don't take this the wrong way) check some of your words before posting your chapters...I realise that in the first lines you meant to say Vegeta was always gentle but it has come out as genital - as in his manhood. Despite that (and it's no big thing - the word not Veggies "manhood") I really enjoyed it and would like to read more and soon!! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 27, 2002 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww that was sooo cute!!
You should definitly continue with this.
I really liked it, it was soo good!
YAY!!! |
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