| "Subjects of My Sanity" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 18:02 CST
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good chappy. i like how u make them get to know eachother before anything happens.
Shinigami smiles apon thee,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 23:48 CST
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I need to thank DarkPrincess! I had forgotten the part about Duo and his suicidal attempts...hmm thats probably not a good thing to forget is it?
Anyways, lovin the chapters. All of them. All the time. yeah...
I'm glad the truth, or part of it, has finally come out. Wufei's confession about helping throw away a dead body probably wasn't the easiest thing to do ne? I mean aye... gotten keep the Canadian thing in there. *laughs*
Oh and before I go to bed (so tired...) love how you set that up, the confessions. With Duo trying to get Heero warm, beng hit, bruise being found, yadda yadda yadda. Near ingenious that! Hats off to yeah there chum. |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 10:00 CST
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exelent fic and i cant help but wonder if Duo will confess his atempts at death.
well i hope you had fun with your nephew,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs happily*
One of the most enjoyable, original, nail-biting, visceral Gundam AU's I've had the pleasure of reading.
I really liked how you introduced the characters, threw me off with Wu-babe...totally. Just another sign this isn't your run of the mill Gundam AU's.
*grins happily* I do so want Wu and Treize to get together tho...I have a soft spot for that...
And I like the connection that Wufei and Trowa have...yes I believe I figured out that Wu's boss and the "thing" that killed Trowa's sister are one and the same, ne? I THINK I caught that.
Very interesting with Duo and his suicide attempts...and poor Quat...*sighs*
Anyway, I do look forward to more, and I must say you're going about it the wrong way to get reviews. My muses threaten the readers, and I've found it's a very effective way to get reviews. *grins*
Try it sometime...heh heh heh.
Till next chapter... |
Reviewed By: mei_akutenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 10:40 CST
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Chapter 13:
Great story so far! I want to know how bad Duo is beat up for being past his curfew!! And what happens to 'Fei? I hope you update the story soon. |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 00:20 CST
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*Creepy dark music is heard.* A single white turns on, lighting up a chair in the middle of the large black room. The chair begins to turn (its one of the twisty ones with the wheels that you can spin around and around and around and... okay... back to creepy dark music...). A blond girl petting a black and grey tabby looks up through a curtain of hair. "Terrasa -" A deep rumbling sound is heard. "TIGGER! Your surposed to be EVIL! I'm trying to set a mood here... Stupid cat. Pet him once and he just purrs away!" *glares at cat"
I guess my little scean is over. I was looking forward to that too! *pouts* Anyways, I've said it before (twice I believe o.O), great story! The plot is comeing along really nicely and relationships are developing well. The "subtle" hints are a bit strong if you were just beginning to hint at stuff but other than that, PURRfect. *looks to cat* It figures! NOW he's quite.... grumble grumble... |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 08:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. This is sooo kewl. I can't wait for it to be updated. Keep up the good work. 2X1 foreva. Ja ne!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 18:32 CST
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NO NO NO! The speed is fine. Everything is fine... just fine...
Yeah... anyways story is perfect. As long as you dont drag it out any more than you are its fine. In fact move faster and theres no way you'll be able to keep the same detail you have. Like I said everything is fine. Keep writing like you are. I'm loving the story and its obvious other people are too *points to other replies*. |
Reviewed By: Page of Wands [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 22:13 CST
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Oooo, wonderful fic!! XD I'm just loving it so much!! I read it straight from the beginning up to where you're written up to so far =^__^= I'm so glad I found this!! Actually, it was my friend who recommended it to me *^^* It's just brilliant! I love the angst, and how you write all the different personnalities of the five "subjects" ^_^; They're so distinct, but I'm starting to see connections with their stories.....hm.........o_O; (or am i thinking too much like trowa? gah =_=) I can't wait to see what happens next!! Poor heero, living in a storage closet. =( Actually, i feel sad for all of them *sniff* YaaaaaaaY!! happy day for me *^^* Er, sorry for rambling. ^^ But, this is so cool! hope you update soon..... ;) |
Reviewed By: Selune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2002 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SoW: I absolutely *love* your style of writing. You write with so much detail; it's refreshing to read such... I'm not sure, but it's good, and very rare in fanfiction.
S&G: I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors in this chapter.
O/C: This is very original; at least, I think so. There are a lot of G-boys crazy fics, but I think you are very original in yours.
EF: As I believe I said, I love this fic. It's great, and stupendous, and wonderous, and I anxiously await the next chapter. It's exciting, and no, you're not moving too slow. It's great the way it is.
OR: This is a great fic, and I can't wait until you write more.
Selune |
Reviewed By: Raven On: December 10, 2002 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
konichiwa!
i've been reading this fic for most of the day(i just finished) and i have to say, i love it! you really captured the characters personallities well, i like it much ;D
you have a few grammer errors, but thats perfectly ok, i know i make enough of them myself ;)
one other thing... do more for duo's perspective! ;);D *lol*
thanks alot for writing this,
i really hope you get the next chapter out soon! *waiting anxiously for the next chapter*
arigato!
*Raven*!
P.S.-the way duo held heero when he was cold was soooo incredibly cuuuute! kawaii! |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 22:43 CST
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Ahh another late night, reading another of your fics. ^-^ One more to go then all I do is wait for updates. *sigh* I'm going to hate that... I really enjoy reading your stories. like I said in the other one, you have an amazing talent for writing.
Keep going. I'm not quite sure but I think I may like this one better than the other... yes I'm pretty sure I like this one better (possibly because I know more has to be added on while the other is done. LoL) |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 14:50 CST
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!! I think this is such a great story! I'm really enjoying reading it!! Pleas eupdate soon! Please? |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 04:57 CST
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Please continue this, it is soooooo good. I love the way Duo warmed Heero up, it was so kawaii. You are a fantastic author, please keep up the good work and update again soon.
2X1 foreva.
Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 09:14 CST
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Wahhh. This is still going really well....Keep up the good work.....2+1 all the way....lurve it heaps...Keep up the good work. Ja ne |
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