| "Cinderella: A Sailor Moon Story" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Eo On: June 11, 2002 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good i love it and it is a complete romance even though it is short and all. Well ja Eo |
Reviewed By: Tokyo Rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2002 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eee! I love the story of Cinderella, but maybe you should have made a bit more changes to the plot and all. It followed to closely to the Disney version. But it was still pretty good. Ahhh.... I love a happy ending. Ja! |
Reviewed By: Time Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2001 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a cute story, but it could use a bit more fleshing out. I'm sure you wanted to remain true to the Cinderella story, but it was a bit too true. Also, I suggest you have someone proofread the story. There are a few small spelling errors that a spell check won't catch. Hope that helps you a bit. |
Reviewed By: EtherealAngel On: October 21, 2001 09:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is sooo cute!! I was shocked at first that you made Ami one of the stepsisters but then you made her a nice stepsister, so it's all good! =) |
