| "Hentai Gym Class or Will Some Grab Those Balls?" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Ryouluver343 On: June 23, 2004 06:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my freakin' marshmellows!! i loveitdude!!!!!!!!!!!! Yaoi stories are cool i lke this one. don't know why but is was wowie!!!!!!!!!! Hahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Chibi Kitsune On: February 08, 2004 15:10 CST
Comment/Review:
So you're NOT a guy..? *Ish getting very confused* That hot pic floating around cyberspace- you mean the one where shinji is sucking kaworu's finger? I showed that to my friend and she was like: O.O Another lovely smut! Very good!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Kitsune On: February 08, 2004 14:35 CST
Comment/Review:
-_-u Every fic I click on seems to be yours! ^_^ Well, I'll reiew after I'm finished reading!
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Reviewed By: _Andromeda_ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 09:17 CST
Comment/Review:
That was quite interesting, it would make a good fic if you continued writing about when they got to kaworu's house XD
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Reviewed By: WilliDrairAngel On: July 31, 2003 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHA HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I love a good PWP Yaoi Lemon! And this one was GREAT!!! Write more, WRITE MORE!!! n_n |
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 05:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
no offence, but that was freakin' hot. ^^ I really love your smut. KAWAORU/SHINJI SMUT FOREVER!!!! ^^ please write more like this. ^^ |
Reviewed By: hoshi no tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 17:46 CST
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ah, the sweet smell of yaoi smut in the evening. |
Reviewed By: shrewlaura On: January 06, 2003 02:08 CST
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I liked it and all, but I think you need someone to proof-read it for you. There were quite a few mistakes that wouldn't be caught by a spell check. |
Reviewed By: kat On: December 21, 2002 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great can't wait to read another keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: The Infamous Boss Reo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have no idea how much I love you now. I always wanted to see a fic based on that particularly hot Kaworu x Shinji pic that's been floating around cyberspace for some time now. I can finally say I've gotten my wish ^_^. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUGOI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! another shinji kaworu ficcy!!!! finaly! there rnt enough evangelion nc-17s out there... and stupid fanfiction.net... hmmm... not bad... notice how in all fics (that ive read so far) its always shinji 'inside' of kaworu? hm... o'.'o more! now ill go to ur other ficcys that i havent read yet... u write digimon daikens, ne? ^-^ teehee! i need to go on shinji kaworu high more often but some ppl think i go on it to much... isnt kaworu just soooo kawaii? |
