"Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: FadingSlowly On: July 12, 2004 21:46 CDT Comment/Review: written just as well as your story. i loved it.
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Reviewed By: Blue Siren On: March 04, 2003 09:36 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: Very good one shot, The 7 rating only because the story line has been used a lot. Keep up the good work.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Seak5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 19:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: My computer is on FIRE!!
Wow, talk about hot! Great one shot and if you have anymore out there I can't wait to read them.
Your story has a good flow to it, even though the ending was a little rushed, I still liked it. I never saw the fun in a rushed relationship because I'm a firm believer in prolonging a relationship between two people but I can understand why so many people like this type of story.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 18:05 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: as Cartman would put it: kikass[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 21:36 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: i loved this one to! way to go!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 23:14 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG! THIS FIC ROCKS TOO!!
the ending was a bit rushed, but still kick ass!!
10 OUT OF 10!! WRITE MORE!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 22:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love lemons. This one was very good. Thank you for a great read.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 22:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love it. ;)[ Request Review Removal ] |