| "Moon Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: swissmiss On: July 12, 2004 19:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
awww! that was sweet! and HOT.
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Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the B/V. You should right more lemons like this.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: FloralBlackMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This was absolutely...Wow. You're a **great** lemon author!! I mean after last night I just had to read some of your works and....wow. Just wow. This was wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 06, 2002 04:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot, hot, hot!! Loved it. Sounds like this was the making of Bra. Even if it wasn't, this is a super lemon!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. (Believe it or not, I cried when he thought that thing about Bulma/Trunks and then sacrificed himself *sniff*) Was I the only one that noticed that some of the story was in blue font and the rest was in black? *shrugs* Just wondering.
So was this ... the making of Bra?? *chuckles* What can we say ... it's a proven fact that guys need their quickies. ^_~[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that wuz such a sweet ending!!! ^.^ ...and of course the lemon was nice, too! ^.~ Hot, hot, hot!!! ... or rather, cool, like lemonade. ^.~
Love,
Tina[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I think lemons are the hardest things to write well, especially one shots. But your lemon does the job- and then some! So romantic!!! So erotic!!! Thankyou so much for the great read![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, love lemons esp. B/V. If you go to Grokster you can get a copy of Dragon Ball GT-DBZ-Moonbaby(Video Clip).[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT LEMON!! I loved it!! ^^
I suggest if you want more reviews, I'd mention that this was a VB lemon in the description.
WRITE MORE!! Great work!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: storm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually something that could have happened in the timeline. I wish that there were more like this. AU's are good but nothing beats the Original.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 28, 2002 12:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, kool lemon very original.It kicked butt!
I really liked it, great work!^_^[ Request Review Removal ] |
