| "Pain of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aria On: May 31, 2003 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that you do finish this fic before you leave, or I will go mad with waiting for you to finish. You are wrong though, just thought I would let you know that your story get BETTER with every chapter, not worse. This is quite a good story and I want to know what is going to happen next cause I have been following this story for a very long time and I intend to see the end of it, no matter how long it takes. Even if it takes 10 years. When I start reading a good story (and believe me yours qualifies) I can't stop until I know a happy ending has taken place and the characters will be safe and happy in their lover's arms.
Love ya always,
Aria |
Reviewed By: KaollaSu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 17:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! You wrote more I was waiting please write more before you leave.And make sure that you finish your other fic too.^-^ |
Reviewed By: Macarena On: May 28, 2003 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: KaollaSu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 17:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ha!You wrote more but where were you?!?! You know what I'm talkin about. You know I got a paper cut because of you! >:( Hey I wonder if that means that this is a flame? Whoo I flamed you hahaha ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Aria On: April 29, 2003 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you updated again and I am sorry that I didn't e-mail again. I have been very busy since Softball started up for me. I like what is happening with the plot but what is going to happen now that Duo is home and Heero is going to tell him what happened. AAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! I hope that Trowa kicks his ass. That would be interesting for the storyline. By the way I think it is Lucrezia Noin if that is how you spell
it. I remember since I have all the videos on DVD
and they used that as her first name. I love the new chapter and I hope that you update again. If you have another writer's block come to me and I will try to help out.
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Airen On: April 11, 2003 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a fic. I have to say, Heero and Duo are scaring the heck out of me. I have never seen Duo acting so malicious. And poor Wu-baby...I can't imagine him accepting abuse for so long like that. I would think he would have tried to escape from Duo after their father died. ::shrugs:: But I don't know.
Anyway, I'm hooked. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Mais Non, Mon Ami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 12:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry I havent reviewed until now but that was incredible! Please continue! This story's addictive ... in a non-Duo addicted type of way. ;-) Anyways, you're doing great! Please continue!
~Mais Non, Mon Ami |
Reviewed By: mikisho On: March 07, 2003 14:44 CST
Comment/Review:
your fic is wonderful! i love it! oh yeah, and i think i read another version of this where duo sees wufei cooking and gets mad cause wu looks like his momma. then duo holds a knife to wu's neck and decides to kill him. now im confused. is that another version of something you wrote, or is that another fic by another author?
oh yeah, and please dont let duo die. i know you do want it to be a happily ever after thing, but duo is still wu's brother, nonetheless. just have duo go to jail or something instead. you should have q-man get some action too (and zechs or trieze mysteriously show up)! actually, it would be really cool if quatre lectured duo on how duo is being abusive, and then duo realized his actions and apologized, or went to some sort of abuse clinic and apologized. It would also be cool if wu and tro got married. i know they're young, but it would be soooooooo cute!
Or, you could always end it on a angsty note, and have heero rape wu, and then wu kills himself cause he doesnt think he deserves trowa.
sorry for writing so much. you dont have to take any of my ideas, cause like my fics, their really stupid :-)! and dont forget to finish this wonderful fic, cause I'LL KILL YOU IF YOU DONT! J/K!
your fan,
mikisho |
Reviewed By: how can you!!!??????????!!!!!!!!!! On: March 07, 2003 14:28 CST
Comment/Review:
how can you do this to me??????????????!!!!!!!! just stopping there? the ficcie is too good! its just EVIL to do that to a reader when you write so well!
write more! i love it! keep it up! and email me PLEASE when you update!!!!
mandy200@aol.com |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 20:50 CST
Comment/Review:
yay, love it, but it was the end was it?? It better not be, please, please another part |
Reviewed By: Aria On: March 05, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated again I am so happy!!!!! I'm still here and you're welcome for the ideas! I am a natural romantic at heart and I must have a happy ending in all stories. The way you are writing right now is capable of taking this story in a number of places! You can have Wufei move out of his house with Duo and have Quatre help keep him safe! (Have Q play bodyguard :P) But what about Heero?! Oh no! I don't think Quatre will be able to get him out of the house as quickly as Wufei would like and next time he might not be as lucky as he was with Heero. I hope you use something like the park idea, it would be just like in Wufei's book! The prince coming to the rescue of the damsel! Give me an e-mail and we can talk more. ^_^
Love ya,
Aria
P.S. Sorry about the really long e-mail...I kinda got carried away. *blushes* hehe Oops. |
Reviewed By: The B-chan On: February 22, 2003 23:40 CST
Comment/Review:
No! That was evil. It's not nice to tease....oh well. You said "If you really want that lemon, then tell me how much you want it" so I will. Please write it or I'll cry! That is a grave threat from me. you must submit to the lure of writing the lemon! it's mean not to.
Impaitiently Awaiting Next Chapter (hopefully with lemon), The B-chan |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 14:58 CST
Comment/Review:
yay another chapter. can't wait till the next chapter. :P |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 22, 2003 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really cool! I hope you do write the lemon in soon or you will have a reason to swear on your early grave. WRITE THE LEMON. Please. Okat anyway the story is excellent and I hope you don't let Heero get a piece of Wufei. Maybe Heero will try to molest him in a park and Trowa will come to Wufei's rescue. Then have a happy lemon scene. That would be sooooooo KAWAI! Oh and what about Quatre? What is going to happen when Duo and Wufei come in? I hope nothing bad does happen...I think. But if Duo hits him in there then Quatre will have proof of the abuse and
Wufei can get transfered to another home! Then Trowa and his family can offer to take him up and then the park thing happens with Heero. Okay sorry about blabbing all these ideas, but you said you were getting short. I don't know if these fit your writing style but I think they would go very well with the situation you have set up.
Love ya,
Aria
P.S. You always could have Duo die from using Heroine. Then Yuy would be free to stalk him. Uh-oh. 0_0 RUN WUFEI! |
Reviewed By: Koriko_dragoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 13:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I luffle you for finally getting it up^^ I have been dieing to read this chapter (Sure you knew that already though ^.~)
Ko-Ko Loves Anime |
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