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Title: Well Done
Reviewed By: White_Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was very well done, I enjoyed it alot. It has been added to my favorits list. I hope you continue writing fanfiction. I also invite you to take a peek at mine if you want. I wirte adventures no Yaoi.
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good ending! Love the jail scene with Heero - bittersweet. I would like to see a side fic/sequel w/Duo in Ireland. It could not have been an easy transition....perhaps you have one in mind?????
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Reviewed By: Jin-i-Seid [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading your fic (or at least what you have done so far, lol) and I must say that I am very impressed with the in depth thinking and realism put into this story. I don't think I've ever read a GW abuse fic like this at all, where two out of five of the main characters are nearly completely abominable (namely, Heero and Duo). And yet, you show yourself to be more than just a great author with a wonderful knack for ideas, but also an author who knows how to infuse their work with authenticity--your main characters (1,2,5), though flawed, each have their saving graces, making your story a harrowing tale of down-to-earth circumstances in a world where nothing is black or white. Very nice, very very well thought out. The grammar could be worked on, but the idea behind this is mostly solid, and it is an intense read at many a time. Thanks! and update again SOON! VERY SOON! CLIFFIES ARE EVIL! ...lol...
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Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 08:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cruel and unusual punishment, I hope you know that. I am very pleased with this fic, and I hope it doesn't take you a couple more years to finish it. Well, until you update again.
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Reviewed By: Kicking and Screaming On: November 15, 2006 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this and I love it. Something's wrong with chapter 7 though. It seems to belong in a whole other story.
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Title: Pain of life
Reviewed By: PhoenixAngel2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would really like it if you update Its been so long since the las update and I really liked this fic even though Wufei was being hurt it as starting to go better for him. please update soon if not im going to have to lave more of these nagging reviews.
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Title: Back again ;)
Reviewed By: ~LiiLl MieY~ On: July 05, 2006 05:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Me again,,, Just wanted to say,,, that I Hope you update bloody soon,,, I wanna know what's going to happen,,, I wanna know what's gonna happen between Wufei & Duo,,, Aaah And I'm sure I'm not the only one,,, So pretty please update soon *puppydogs eyes* well that's it buh-bye ~LiiLlMieY~
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Reviewed By: wingofshinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this ma story hurry up and pls update don't be another talented writer who left an unfinished story
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 02:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my Gods... you haven't updated this in over a month... I just discovered this, and i would like more... no matter how much you think it sucks, it rocks! Write more please
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Reviewed By: ~LiiLl MieY~ On: May 02, 2005 07:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noo!! a cliffie!!! how could you?!?!?!?! doesn't matter just hope you update bloody soon. 'cause this is like the best stories i've ever read...kaaY?? wel really hope you update soon see ya LiiL MieY
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Reviewed By: Saioko On: March 14, 2005 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to ask if there will be any more new chapters. You have started a good story, you have to finish it some day!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: Little Wolfie On: August 14, 2004 04:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MMUUUUUUUCCCCCHHHHH UUUHHM??? THAT'S IT I GUESS. UUUH LOVE YOUR STORY DIDN'T I ALREADY SAY THAT OH WELL HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON BUHBYESS WOLFIE
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Reviewed By: ~*Kia*~ On: June 24, 2004 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great but if I was Noin I wouldnt have left them alone. Anyway I really wish you would update the other story soon it was getting so good.
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kico Yushimi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG U HAVE TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSIBILE I LOVED YOUR STORY IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!
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Title: HHHHEEEEEYYYYYY!
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 12:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
COME ON!!!!! GOD!!! You had to leave it like that didn't you? Just to drive me(especially me) and people like me totally nuts! Total cliffy, Duo is out of rehab and happy/out of it and now he has reconsiled with Wufei and Heero is following Trowa to get to Wufei, is Duo going to save Wufei's ass and get back together with Heero? Please write soon, I know you don't always have computer access, but I need to know what happens. Or you could just email me the rest of the plot....*wink wink nudge nudge* I love ya, Aria
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