Reviewed By: nycscribe46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 17:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it. The style of writing was very interesting-the kind of first person narrative that is like delving into a character's brain-and done very well, I might add. Everything was spelled correctly as far as I can tell, which is good, because errors can distract from the story. Full points for originality-I have never read a fic like this one. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I'm definitely going to read your other stories.
Jay |