| "The Son Lemons" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: alildevilgurl^_~ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 17:44 CST
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this fic was realli good. the second chapt was so cute! hahahaha. poor goten. hahaha. well it was good. maybe another chapt will make it more interestin but remember its jus a suggestion. ^_^v peace! |
Reviewed By: Marla38 On: February 06, 2003 13:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Girl, your lemons are GREAT!
I love this Saiyan side of Goku, and i have to admit that your story really improved my own sex life!
Wont you write more? I'd love you to.
And thanks!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kahliquah On: January 22, 2003 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
and that's all I'm going to say.....did I say I love it!!!!! |
Reviewed By: zcreed On: January 18, 2003 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow is all I can say I loved both of the fanfic I hope you write another one. |
Reviewed By: Vekou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very good written, i like it!!
liked the part of Goten, that was funny! |
Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Katie no one asked u besides more people like it then you so ou well |
Reviewed By: katie On: January 07, 2003 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
it sucked |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Goten. Having to watch his mom and dad do *that*, and not even getting an explanation for it all. Anyway, good lemon. |
Reviewed By: MajinKai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job man! I like reading Goku/ChiChi lemons all the time... just not enough of them out there :( Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 21:59 CST
Comment/Review:
haha that was funny, I can imagine Goten doing that! |
Reviewed By: Fate On: December 23, 2002 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL! That was so cute. I laughed my head off. Very well written. Can't wait to read the next one. |
Reviewed By: JenTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW nicely writin chica, jsut love it |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 04:34 CST
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Yes I agree there are heaps of Vegeta/Bulma fics but hardly any Goku Chi-Chi fics! Anyway yours was good! Please write some more!! |
Reviewed By: Takeo On: December 09, 2002 13:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! And I agree with you on the lack of GokuxChichi fics ^_^ Goku can be just as saiyanlike as Vegeta. If you write more lemons, I'll surely read them ^_^V |
Reviewed By: Takeo On: December 09, 2002 13:03 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I agree with you on the lack of GokuxChichi fics out there. Goku can act just as saiyan like as Vegita! Anyhoo, if you write more GokuxChichi lemon, I will surely read them ^__^ |
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