| "The Son Lemons" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: GreyFox23 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good but ur spelling need's some work
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Reviewed By: Ze On: December 20, 2003 04:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. That was s ofunny I loved it. You ought to write one of what hapen with Krillin and 18. If you have I want to read it. That was well written and so funny I loved it lots.
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Reviewed By: annakiyah On: July 27, 2003 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry but the spelling and grammar really sucks, is English your main language? I forgive you if it's not.
I agree though that there are not enough Goku/Chichi lemon fanfics, and I appreciate you trying to do something about that, but I like it more sweet, not so rough. I like very much romance and innocence, especcially with the naieve goku.
I think I am not going to bother reading the peppermint fun story, I think it will also not be my style, sorry :(
They are my favorite couple, and I am working on my first fanfic, it's a lemon about this couple too, but a romantic and sweet one.
If you want to read the first part, just ask me and I will send it to you. My e-mail is: annakiyah@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: lauren On: June 16, 2003 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great i loved it |
Reviewed By: v son sayain On: May 13, 2003 17:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting. poor lost Goten, poor embarssed Gohan |
Reviewed By: alildevilgurl^_~ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 17:44 CST
Comment/Review:
this fic was realli good. the second chapt was so cute! hahahaha. poor goten. hahaha. well it was good. maybe another chapt will make it more interestin but remember its jus a suggestion. ^_^v peace! |
Reviewed By: Marla38 On: February 06, 2003 13:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Girl, your lemons are GREAT!
I love this Saiyan side of Goku, and i have to admit that your story really improved my own sex life!
Wont you write more? I'd love you to.
And thanks!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kahliquah On: January 22, 2003 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
and that's all I'm going to say.....did I say I love it!!!!! |
Reviewed By: zcreed On: January 18, 2003 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow is all I can say I loved both of the fanfic I hope you write another one. |
Reviewed By: Vekou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very good written, i like it!!
liked the part of Goten, that was funny! |
Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Katie no one asked u besides more people like it then you so ou well |
Reviewed By: katie On: January 07, 2003 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
it sucked |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Goten. Having to watch his mom and dad do *that*, and not even getting an explanation for it all. Anyway, good lemon. |
Reviewed By: MajinKai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job man! I like reading Goku/ChiChi lemons all the time... just not enough of them out there :( Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 21:59 CST
Comment/Review:
haha that was funny, I can imagine Goten doing that! |
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