| "Child of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Love Psycho [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 09:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this! I'll definitly want to keep an eye on this! Cupcakes for you!
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Reviewed By: WalkerSister [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 11:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, interesting idea. I hope you write more soon - I'd love to know how it all ends. |
Reviewed By: moon On: January 26, 2002 15:52 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. Its a very different idea and I'm curious to know what will happen next.What will squall be like when he's older and is he still going to be the 'leader, in this story? I hope you will post some more chapters soon. |
Reviewed By: Troy Thomas On: September 14, 2001 16:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I honestly enjoyed reading (the story). I am looking forward to future chapters.
A comment:
Your is possessive
e.g. Your story has a few spelling mistakes
You're is a contraction of you are
e.g. You are writing a nice story
Questions (these are rhetorical):
One: What is the direction you are taking the story in?
Two: Will it be happy? Sad?
Three: Will you have original characters?
Four: How will the Squall in this story be different from the original?
Five: Will he be as extroverted as his father, Laguna?
Six: Will he have the calmness of his mother, Raine?
Seven: How will the differences in Squall's personality affect the rest of the cast?
Eight: How will the differences in Squall's personality affect the story?
Ex cetera
Anyway, I enjoyed reading the story, and look forward to future chapters. |
