| "Storms" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Yusagi Sombermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 01:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty good...one small qualm, though...Tasuki's nota virgin...XD Watase mentions that he used to go to slave girls to...um...'release tension/frustration' in one of her descriptions of him... ^^'
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Reviewed By: Yumeni [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this one! So waff:y and romantic! *_* Please make another one or another chapter! (Preferably with the same feeling, no angsty Tamahomes or such, that's a real mood killer). I loved that it focused on Tasuki and Miaka and left out the worries of tomorrow. It's hard to keep the right mood reading lemons or romantic fics with angsty atmosphere here and there. Yours was really nice to read. I loved the storm situation. Good work. Keep writing ^_^v (oh, and no points on spelling and grammar cause I'm no naitive english speaker, I can't judge you with my own poor english skills!)
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Reviewed By: jynnantonnix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! I loved it! Sequel, sequel!
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Reviewed By: me On: January 30, 2004 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i love it mabe you could add more like what if Tamahome found out oh ohoh and tasuki proposes
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Reviewed By: Sana On: April 02, 2003 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichi wa, ^^
Nicely done fic. I was always wanting to read a Tasuki and Miaka fic. You did a really nice job, and I think you kept them in character pretty well. But i am not one to get all hissy of ooc, that is probably why I read more CCS fics than anything else. Keep up the good work and continue writting. ja! |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Tasuki and Miaka and I love how you played this out. EXTREMELY ROMANTIC!! I LOVED IT! |
Reviewed By: Valy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice lemon! Very sweet and all!!!
I really loved the teary Tasuki while the uhm... 'penetration' scene. *g*
So sweet.
Will you write a Hotohori x Miaka lemon? *puppy eyes* |
Reviewed By: Star of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very impressed with your descriptions of them while they were making love. I especially loved "bandit wolf". That one was very good. This was a very good story and I do hope to read more of your stories. I hope to also have you read and review mine soon. |
Reviewed By: trinity_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 19:34 CST
Comment/Review:
It's so kawaii!!! I liked it, very good. Write more ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ANTHY HIMEMIYA WAZ HERE On: November 04, 2002 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, WOW! Very good job! ^_^ Kudos!! |
Reviewed By: Silver Demoness On: January 24, 2002 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well hi there, actually, great fic! One thing though, Miaka, *crosses fingers and hopes* Does NOT call people baby. Not to Tasuki, not to Tamahome, Not to Nuriko, Not to no-body. My opinion, for that matter........*_*
Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Umi On: October 06, 2001 19:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've said it before and I'll say it again - Fushigi Yugi fics are hard to do. This one seemed right out of the pages of the manga...which is both good and bad. I didn't see any change in mood or any change at at all really. The mark of a good fic is that it uses the characters of the anime (or whatever the fic is about) and puts them in a situation or in an environment they aren't normally in. I'd love to see an FY fic where they are sent somewhere other than Suzaku or Seiryu. I'd love to see an FY fic that wasn't romantic...but that is what FY is and I guess I'll have to get past it. I'm all too aware that most fans of the series love the romance element first and foremost, but the characters are really interesting and I think they're some of the best you'll see in any anime. I thought you were a good writer but since you asked for some constructive criticism to get better so I'll give you some. Your dialogue was a little weak. Also, for this fic, I would have loved for it to have been first person, even if it wasn't Miaka but instead Tasuki (now that would be interesting). Your overall style was good and I hope you do some more stuff. That was insanely long...if you want to e-mail for some reason it's thecakebakingwatergoddess@hotmail.com. I'd love to talk! |
