| "Melancholy Interlude" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 08:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice! Not fluffy but it did hold a touch of the romantic. You pulled off what many fanfic writers fail to do. Great lemon and very good imagery. ~_^
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Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma and Veg, I can't believe I only just found them. Good good good good good good good good good lemon. Yummy Veggie ^-^ |
Reviewed By: LS On: February 01, 2003 00:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Very lovely...from start to finish! Very 'in-character'. I'm gonna email you w/ comments later, so I don't spoil any moments for new readers ^_~...but, I will say 'the eyes have it' w/ this one! I bet you can guess my favorite lines in this piece ^_~...{*ahem* I am *um* talking about the eyes here *^_^*}. |
Reviewed By: sweetbrunette52 On: January 02, 2003 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! That was sure a very good a$$ lemon. Its very steamy!! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: December 15, 2002 11:07 CST
Comment/Review:
nice fic mate. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 On: December 05, 2002 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT lemon writing, Ku!! I LOVED it!! Very sexy!! You kept them in character too! I love how he smacked her butt when he left her, and how she thought she'd not wear underwear next time she was out. I don't see them having some big romantic afterglow...the humor was much more in character than some big admission of love! Excellent fic! Now, go write MORE!! :o) |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaahhhh, no time to review...need to take shower...cold...cold..shower... : ) |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: December 04, 2002 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an excellent lemon! I LOVED it! |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ku! You FINALLY wrote a lemon!!! I LOVE IT!!!! Thankyou!
>Falls to the floor, thanking you profusely! |
Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was your first lemon? Great job! Please write more! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmm, that was intense! A wonderful lemon! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 01, 2002 06:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. The lemon was tasty too ^_~. You didn't make Veggie and Bulma all romantic afterwards either. Good job!! |
Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 19:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I really ENJOYED IT!! and you KNOW I am not a HUGE B/V fan! GREAT JOB AM |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's no way that I can believe that this is your first lemon, Ku - it was delicious! You have a great writing style and I can't wait to read the tons of additional lemons you're going to grace us with now that you're not a 'lemon virgin' anymore! 8-D
Loved it!
Meliza |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 22:04 CST
Comment/Review:
You go girl, that was great. I love a great lemon. A lemon B/V is a plus. Bulma should always go commando with Vegeta around. |
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