"Yokoi no Death and Rebirth" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Strikelark [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 18:37 CST Comment/Review: I've been checking everyday for this, I'm so happy! Please continue as soon as possible!! I like that how you made Shu and Touma brothers. |
Reviewed By: Shadow Arashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 08:49 CST Comment/Review: Oooooooooh more! ^_^ God! But I want more of Anubisu/Seiji goodness! *whines pitifully* I wanna see more of those two, they are the best! And why the hell does Shu's mother hates Saya so much?? |
Reviewed By: Strikelark [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 20:37 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Please, please,please update soon. Look you reduced me to begging! Can't help it I love this story. I'd say by far this is one of the best stories I have read with an original character added like that. Plus Touma is my favorite character and you write him well, so please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Split Persona On: December 01, 2002 07:09 CST Comment/Review: JC: Interesting. And about ya grammar, it's written the mosy will understand because it is the way most talk.
Catherine: Ohh, Touma seems so adorable curled up to the woman he loves lke that. But poor Seiji, what is he going to do? Will his heart be broken in the end?
Kahrine: This looks like a good chapter. I can't wait for ya to write the next. Maybe you could add something happening to Seiji. Like him crashing in that sweet ass car and then worrying more about his father killing him than his own injuries. ^_^
JC: I actually like the sounda that. Please wruite next chapter soon. ^^ |