| "A Name Without a Name" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: CHAPTER
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami(not signed in) On: August 13, 2004 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WO HOO Great chapter!!!!! It was so sweet. Momo gotr SAe there! She shouldn;t forgive her! HA HA! SHE GAVE HER A KICK IN THE A**! It;s so sweet Momop's with Kiley. I don't like Toji. Well anyway! GReatr job! I recommend los of people to read it!
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Title: oooohhh?!
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kool! Lots of action! I want to know who died! I read the chapter on FF.net. It sill won't appear in MM. well anyways, update as soon as possilbe! Please!!!!!I WANT TOT KNOW MORE!!!!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 11:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Come on please update!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!! You haven't update for months!
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Title: SAd
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darn this fanfic is just so addicting to read man! It was pretty sad when Toji died and Momo lost her memories. At first I thought Momo was pretty mean to Kiley when he tried to comfort her at the party and the date. But when I read the diary, I understood. I knew Sae was going to be the bad guy. Because in the manga she is a bad guy. I thought Sae was going to be a nice friend at first and Eric and Kevin. They ended up as bad guys. I hate sae! Well keep updating!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!! The Suspension is killing me! By the way it's wierd hearing Kiley and Toji brothers. ^_^
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Reviewed By: SailorPenguinz On: June 25, 2003 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phwee! This is a fun ficcy! ^^ Hopefully you'll update soon...since you haven't for a few months...You can't leave the story like this!!! >_ |
Reviewed By: robin hoodie On: March 23, 2003 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW!!Greatfanfic!Ilove everything so far, except there were a few confusing sentences... But otherwise, this has got to beone of thebest PG fanfics out there!! You hafta hurry up and update, though, because I can't wait much longer to see what happens. One question, how exactly do you pronounce Kil? As in Kil kun.. I just wanna know, because it looks cute, but... anywho!! ^.^ keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Gohan On: February 23, 2003 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!! The only thing I don't like about it is that Toji died :( Oh well, keep up the good work and update your story soon!! |
Reviewed By: LazyBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww poor toji died. like the story so far or is it finished((i'm asking becuz u haven't updated it in a longtime))? Eh.....if it is finished then ignore me lolz. I also get confused just like voidsenshi. hehehe =P, but i really liked it! Keep writing Peach Girl fanfics they are really kewl, AND try out writing inuyasha fanfics too, you write really great romantic fanfics so writing inuyasha fanfics will be a breeze for you =) |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
wow look loook!!! this is the third...count it THIRD story that I have read and reviewed of your today!!!
This story however, has to be one of you more confusing ones. I was starting to have trouble keeping up with who was who....and just what was going on.
*shrugs* oh well
maybe it is just me...you know how easly I get confused.
Keep up the good work ^_~! |
