| "Humanity" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: YamaiTaitosdaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2001 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOO THAT KICKED &*(!!!!! Didn't exspect the ending *sobs* james died!!oh well... it was neat...*sighs* brocks finally got a girl, and she can throw fire... heh.. majorly cool ficcy... wish it were a movie... can't wait til digital humanity! |
Reviewed By: pyrokinatic On: December 07, 2001 22:51 CST
Comment/Review:
great ending to a great story im definatly going to keep ready for your next fics... this is one however will be hard for you top.... |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2001 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOHOO! Excellent chapter! Lots of action, love, and also a loss of a someone special. Excellent work! The Pokemon can live their Human lives while their errr... "dopplegangers" resume their Pokemon training roles! Hmmmm... that blue headband part was interesting. (grins)Now the nagging thought, what is it about the news broadcast that got B.R.A.I.N. so shook up about? (wink) To tell the truth, I am still baffled! I can't wait to read the next installment! Excellent work!
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2001 21:37 CST
Comment/Review:
AIIEEE!! I meant that review for chapter 9! Sorry!
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2001 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL! Wow! What a shocking predicament! Ash, Misty, and Brock are posessed! I can't wait for the next part! I guess I don't have to, the next part is up already! (Hee hee) I am glad the relationship between B.R.I.A.N. and Togipi has finally surfaced! (grins) Great work! Well, on the next part!
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: Misty WIldfire On: December 07, 2001 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! COOL!!!!! i loved it!!!! it was sooooo good!!!! and great suprises!!! my goodness!!! ahahaha loved it!!! |
Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: December 05, 2001 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe i finally got round to reading it! hehe i loved it!!!! i hope you get some more soon!!!! Its great!!! |
Reviewed By: S On: December 05, 2001 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, that was awesome! That's all I can say here, Digifan. CYA! |
Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: December 04, 2001 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I bet that was kinda fun. A few interesting bits... I dunno. The dreams were a neat touch. Bit clichéd, but you can't really avoid that. Don't really know. Not too badly written, kinda interesting. Be curious to see what else ya pull out of that hat of yours. Still think you might want to consider a beta-reader for all your spelling and grammar stuff. |
Reviewed By: pyrokinatic On: December 04, 2001 15:54 CST
Comment/Review:
very nice touch man.... it stil needs a little more fight but not much the brian dream was a good touch too... you did a great job cant wait till ch 10! |
Reviewed By: TG On: December 02, 2001 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh.....scary......Very nice. Hurry up don't leave me hanging! |
Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: November 30, 2001 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
*blinks*.....wooooooowwwwwwwwww............AAAH!HHH!!!! WHATS GUNNA HAPPEN!!!!!!!!!!!hehehe really good ^^ |
Reviewed By: YamaiTaitosdaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2001 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!!!!! OOOHHHH! this was sooo cool... now i wanna know what happens next!!! whats with togepi being "the one" why is delilah so important, whats with the dreams..... I WAN MOREEEEEEE!!!!! adventure, romance and all that other good stuff!!! |
Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: November 29, 2001 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, cool! I really like them going to school, that was nicely addressed and everything. Very good. Spelling is always an issue, but it wasn't too bad. Um, I liked this, and... write more!! |
Reviewed By: Michelle Samiyo On: November 29, 2001 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey I'm busy now so I'll reveiw n read later.
~Michelle Samiyo |
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