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| "Can I Get Away With Another Song?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 13:12 CST
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You did a good job with it, I like it. I would suggest changing the paragraphs for an easier read, and possibly adding more detail in a few places. Also, the conversation between Ryou and Bakura was a little odd, the way it was mostly fragments, and stuff. The idea about Yami telling Yugi with a song was pretty cool, and the song was neat too. You should definitely continue.
| Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 05, 2004 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do a sequel with Bakura & Ryou. Newayz great fic.
| Reviewed By: emi rodrig On: December 01, 2002 20:34 CST
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u just in 8 grade? u sure kno a lot... keep it up! who said getting drunk was bad?lol |
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