| "The Pursuing Evil" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: oh bloody hell
Reviewed By: blargle On: January 17, 2005 06:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was sent a link to this by an online commmunity, and after reading i had to go stick my head out of my window because i honestly thought i was gonna be sick. First off: (and i LOVE this anime, so i know my stuff) Black Jack isn't called the "genius" doctor for nothing, he wouldnt have to look up in a book what he already no doubt knows. The bit that REALLY gave me a headache was the fact i could barely discern who was talking and what and were... And where in the name of holy swiss cheeses did that dream come from? whatever youre taking i woudlnt mind seeing if its legal! Nightshade? Sounds like something out of a magic/fantasy novel, ive read enough of them to know.. So, in short i agree with the other review, an' if i see any more atrocity like this, ill be poppin' round fer a visit alog with my nice sharp, shiny katana. cya hun!~ o.~ *waves*
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Reviewed By: Name/Nick: On: January 15, 2005 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You suck. You hurt my eyes. Is English not your first language? And WTF is with all the random underlining? Asian women don't have green eyes. And your "nightshade virus" thing is to medical science what Star Trek technobabble is to physics. It makes my head hurt and makes no sense. In conclusion, your attempts at writing make the Baby Jesus cry, and you need to get another hobby. KTHXBYE p.s. Did I mention that you suck? p.p.s. I was given the link to your writing (if that is the word I want) by a young woman who is a big Black Jack fan, and she says that if you ever write about Black Jack again, she will hunt you down and rip out your spleen with a big rusty metal hook. K?
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Reviewed By: Scarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. One thing I noticed is that a lot of the writing is underlined. That is very distracting. If you are using the underlines to indicate that someone speaking, it is easier to just use quotation marks. That's the reason why I gave your style of writing a 6.
I think someone is setting Yuriko up because they're jealous. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Bester On: March 23, 2003 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHERE IS THE REST?
You have to continue this! |
Reviewed By: xan_nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who is the one that is trying to kill all the patients? Please, write more! |
