| "The Hypocrite Hunter" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
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Reviewed By: mikai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked your fic. it taught me a lot, and that goes with kuwabara's statement in chapter 1(about his homophobia and how he changed his opinion) well that's the same for me...so i really agreed with this fic. i wasn't against homosexuals, but i didn't understand it(i hadn't even hit puberty yet) and now that im older...i can see that love has no bonds, no even gender can stand in it's way.. anyhow...as i read chapter 2 i just wanted to say something about the "christian coalation" part...i am christian and i have nothing against homosexuals, and maybe some christians do; i can't say for them(i am also american...) but no one has any RIGHT whatsoever to treat others badly or wrongly because they don't "agree" with their choice in life. it's total. B.S!(for lack of a better term...) and i was wondering, that whole thing mentioned in chapter one about most fanfic writers being either homo or bisexuals(or supporters of-) is true? b/c it seems to be so... anyhow...i really enjoyed reading your enlightening story. maybe some of those stuckup, phobics should read it, even if it's just to see things from someone's point of view... anyhow...i like that...great job!
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Reviewed By: kittyme2 On: February 15, 2004 16:14 CST
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I find this story to be quite intriguing. You made me see many things about America(my home country) that I had never seen before. You also helped to reinforce my beliefs on homosexuality and abortion. Homosexuality is not a terrible thing, and even if you do not agree with you should respect, at least. Abortion is something that I don't believe in unless you are a rape victim or it's the difference between life and death. My father is military and yet I did not know about the forced drafting being so terrible, and I didn't know that all we had to do was fill out papers to withhold information from our schools. I'm really looking at things a lot more differently. Thanks for bringing so much to light. Please, write more. I'm quite sincere in my request.
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Reviewed By: Fire_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably the most honest view of America I've seen in a while. It's sad that this train of thought isn't shared by more people, especially those in the U.S. Good luck, and great work! ~ Kari
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Reviewed By: Fire_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably the most honest view of America I've seen in a while. It's sad that this train of thought isn't shared by more people, especially those in the U.S. Good luck, and great work! ~ Fire_Rose
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Reviewed By: Fire_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably the most honest view of America I've seen in a while. It's sad that this train of thought isn't shared by more people, especially those in the U.S. Good luck, and great work! ~ Kari
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Reviewed By: Forest Kreen On: December 20, 2003 00:45 CST
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thank you. maybe some of my fellow americans who are more biggotted than I MIGHT, by some stroke of luck, figure things out. As I agree with your views on all the topics you covered, I can only hope others will see it. A great way to put your opinion out there. hope you manage to post it lots of places - if the morons can't accept it, it's their fault, not yours. I only wish more americans (the 'we rule the world' thinkers) would pull their heads from their rears and see things in your light. screw those that don't.
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Reviewed By: insanechildfanfic On: July 24, 2003 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually agree with you on the views of this war. There is no proof of anything yet they are going into countries and attacking others, like America (I am american) is holy than thou, but it's not it's like Rome was before it's fall or something. And money practially rules this stupid goverment. Urg, no money, no place to go. Though I do enjoy the public schooling, there could be so many changes to it. |
Reviewed By: insanechildfanfic On: July 24, 2003 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay an American and Christian here. And I do agree with you that there are a lot of biggots out there and I wanted to say, I try not to discriminate. |
Reviewed By: Piccolo'sVampire Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU!I think the discrimination on gays/lesbians is bulL.I think you should post this story on any sites that will except it.It is so wrong to discriminate like that,I mean I think that if to people need and,/,or love each other it shouldn't matter if thier both boys or both girls.Well I have said my peice.
Ja n'e
P.S:WWW.FanFiction.Net would except your story you should post there. |
