| "A Separate Thread" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Jimbo_2400 On: November 30, 2003 12:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great fanfic, I relize that it's been about a year since you last updated and you probably won't check the reviews anymore but if you do please finish this, it's a wonderful fanfic
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Reviewed By: Chosen one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! It stays with the story and has the exact same lines and it has a few new characters! I want to see the next chapter! Maybe Marina will start getting the symtoms of pregnancy like feeling neausa and stuff. Make the next baby be a boy and make him look exactly like Auron! |
Reviewed By: Kit On: February 22, 2003 12:09 CST
Comment/Review:
*breaks out in a cold sweat* I have this THING for Auron, and reading an Auron lemon gets me all giddy! *le swoon* |
Reviewed By: Liquid Snake On: December 28, 2002 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. But where's the Kimahrix Rikku part? |
Reviewed By: GG Crono 4 On: December 14, 2002 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is....interesting, to say the least. :) |
Reviewed By: Shido21 On: December 11, 2002 03:07 CST
Comment/Review:
You know I love your story. But for those of you who are reading and not reviewing it means a lot to her if you leave comments so please do. This is a great story and worth the read. |
