Reviewed By: Corwin On: July 22, 2003 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Despite the railings of some small-minded people on the holonet (ok, just one) I got a real kick out of this story :-)
Your style of writing was good; there were no spelling or grammar errors that jumped out
at me, or otherwise took away from the story; it was original, in so much as I’ve never
seen any NJO lemons before; and was quite enjoyable.
Good job! |
