| "The Taking of Bulma" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Erobrin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2015 04:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a great fic! I've enjoyed every line :D you even made me like
vegeta! I had hopped for more frieza-bulma-zarbon moments, but
finally, I loved how you depicted the vegeta-bulma ones :D if this
fix wasn't so old, I would definitely hope for more ^^
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Title: Perfect
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2011 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...THIS..is amazing!!!!! i can't wait for your next chapter!!!! i like how you writ long chapters and how much detail you put into them. |
Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: guyan0/katie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 18:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a fab story, Please continue, I love a story that I have no idea where it is goining!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 07:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ecxellent story, please finish it, come on have a heart...
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Title: Your Story
Reviewed By: snowbird7939 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 02:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say it was wonderful throuh and through, the characters and their attitudes were dead on and the way she described the story was just so realistic. Please write more soon, you might even be able to get some of your stories published as erotic/hentai short stories. Girls are gaga over stories like this/ the love - hate relationship. I want to finish reading it I hope you will post more soon.
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Title: Your Story
Reviewed By: snowbird7939 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say it was wonderful throuh and through, the characters and their attitudes were dead on and the way she described the story was just so realistic. Please write more soon, you might even be able to get some of your stories published as erotic/hentai short stories. Girls are gaga over stories like this/ the love - hate relationship. I want to finish reading it I hope you will post more soon.
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Reviewed By: Ibuki On: October 23, 2004 02:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please consider continuing this fic! It is very interesting to read! Please!
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Reviewed By: yoshine On: June 04, 2004 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to give up on writing this story or what . Come on please write a new chapter or at least update because I'm tired of waiting. This fanficion is one of the best I ever read just please write more.
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Reviewed By: Hellwise [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 14:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this and all your other stories! And would really be overjoyed if you updated this one soon!
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Reviewed By: ssj4 yuffie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 03:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, I've read so many AU V/B get together and believe me only a handfull of them wowed me, yours included.
I really like the twists and your writing style, the characterization is also excellent.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: July 27, 2003 08:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome B/V A/U!!! Great plot and yummy lemons. I can see that you're into Yaoi now ~ if you get tired writing any of your current fics, definitely finish this one, plz? |
Reviewed By: YOSHINE On: March 22, 2003 09:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I THINK YOU SHOULD FINNISH THIS STROY IT IS VERY GOOD. I LIKE ALL OF YOUR STORIES |
Reviewed By: Gold_Saiyaness On: February 08, 2003 22:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the flow of words used it was fantastic, also I have seen a plot building throughout the chapters *claps* very good ^_^ Well don't want to write too much you already know how I feel about your fics. *smiles*
ja ne and keep writin!!! |
Reviewed By: Jaotee On: February 09, 2003 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So send me a E-mail when you write a new chapter...You remember me Jaotee@aol.com |
Reviewed By: Abby On: February 13, 2003 18:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading your work! Please write more! |
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