| "The Taste of Roses" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 14:37 CDT
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This fanfic seems... Cruel... I dunno, it is wierd and it puzzles me. You made Hiei pretty much rape Kurama, and made him sound like he hated Hiei... Then when it was all over, he loved him again... Maybe I read wrong or something but that's what it looked like to me... Anou... It was wierd for me. You do have a pretty good writing style though, that was very refreshing, and I do look forward to reading some of your other stuff on here.. It's alwas nice to see someone who doesn't completely embarass themselves grammatically on the site!
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Reviewed By: W On: August 07, 2003 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a nice PWP, especially with Yusuke :D I have such an odd obsession with that pairing... and though the characters were in character enough to be certainly recognizable, I think they were a bit OOC in that Hiei's and Yusuke's negative qualities were overexaggerated as was Kurama's emotional sensitivity... overexaggerated meaning that it wasn't really an issue of intensity so much as changing it a bit... if that makes sense. Overall, I loved it ^_^ I hope you continue with it, and keep writing in general, now on to check out your other stuffs.. |
Reviewed By: Fallen Angel On: June 25, 2003 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was one of the best ones Ive ever read,it perfect the way it is. |
Reviewed By: adrianchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 00:39 CDT
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I don't actually know what to say about this one, but I'd thought I'd leave a review anyway just to let you know it wasn't half bad |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 02:48 CDT
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sometimes love can't be found unless it is compared to sex. Very interesting pieces both of them. |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: March 02, 2003 15:44 CST
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... I loved it. Hiei really used spirit energy for that? lol. Ah, full moons are great in stories. |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 13:46 CST
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Yay! A second part! Good! Sorry it took so long to read it, I almost never check the YYH fics. I hope there's more! |
Reviewed By: sailrjupitr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 19:13 CST
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I'm glad you added a second part though I was surprised about the hiei/yuusuke lemon, lol. cool story! are you continuing? |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 23:21 CST
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Aww, that was really sad and sweet at the same time! It was really good! |
