| "Atlantis" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sayo-chan On: January 15, 2005 02:48 CST
Comment/Review:
::covers mouth an giggles:: Honey, you forgot to upload chapter 2.......you might want to fix that. ::giggles again:: But, other than that, its a good story in progress! Keep up the good writing!
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Reviewed By: ^_^ On: June 24, 2003 14:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool fic. i can't wait to see what happens next so please finish. |
Reviewed By: Krim On: December 15, 2001 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok... question, what happened to Chapter 2? Jumping from 1 to 3 is a little confusing.
It's pretty good so far, you gotta write more, k? Keep the story flowing!
Oi, I am so bad at these things... but you know what I mean, right? |
