| "MY LITTLE SHINNING STAR" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: amethyst_rose1993 On: December 09, 2004 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell with Yugi! Poor Ryou! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Bakura loves him so much! This is a great fic. *sniffle* If You kill off Ryou I'll send you flames every day! Ryou I love You!
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Title: AWWW
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Ra this is so sad, Poor Bakura and Yami can't do anything to help their Hikari's? What's wrong with Ryou? Ra I hope he'll be okay? Please continue I want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: ilpalazzo2 On: December 06, 2004 13:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Your title is misspelled: "shinning" should be "shining". :)
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Reviewed By: Dragon's Lair On: September 28, 2003 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT'S WRONG WIT MY POOR RYOU???!!!WHAT'S WRONG WIT YUGI??!!AND ABSOLUTLY NO FREAKIN' M/M THINGS!! DISGUSTING!!
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Reviewed By: Fever On: February 09, 2003 12:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Write More!!! I LOVE ANGST!!!! PLEEZ |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
hey, not to shabbey. write some more! |
Reviewed By: GOODwriter123456 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..............gee............so sad..........*sniff* OH WELL GOOD STORY GOOD GOOD STORY!! KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!! MORE AND MORE AND MORE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Zoe Moto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Zoe: AHHHH! Poor Ryou!!! Poor Yugi, too!! -cries- What an evil cliffhanger!!!! -gets all worked up- My poor lil' Ryou...
Yugi: You should feel very honored! Zoe has gotten very worked up over your story, which is a good sign...:D
Zoe: Yeah! I love this story!! Please please Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Karadaki On: December 13, 2002 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHH!!!!!!!! I LUV THIS!!!! OGMGOMGOMGOGMG!!!! WAT HAPPENS NEXT!?!??! I NEED TO KNOW!!!! UPDATE SSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!!!!!!! THIS ROCKS!!!! YAYAYAYAYYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAAYAYAYAAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!
WAT HAPPENS TO RYOU!?? AHHH!!!!! ::sob:: i hope hes ok...and Yugi too.....AWWWWWWW!!!! THIS IS SO CUTE!!!!!!!! I LUVE THIS FANFIC!!!!! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL DIE OF SUSPENCE!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: December 09, 2002 14:08 CST
Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story! Kind-of a depressing first chapter though. What disease does Ryou have? Please post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Tara On: December 06, 2002 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey love the fic keep it coming and make it soon i want to find out what happens |
Reviewed By: BakuraFan On: December 06, 2002 07:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is that it? Are you going to add any more? what's up with my Ryou? I love angst stories... |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
AWWW! That's like soooo cute! I hope you continue. I really want to find out what's happening to Ryou. Please, oh please, do not make him die! That would be way too much sadness for me! WAAAAAHHHHH! *hiccup* I'm hysterical already, what a disgrace... *hiccup* |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: December 03, 2002 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT HAPPENED TO RYOU!!?? ?_? So sad. ^_^ Really good though please have more very soooooon! It's kawaii and cryable. ^_^ Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: BakuraFan On: December 03, 2002 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting plotline, although a little yaoi for me. I will can't wait to finish... i want to see what happens to Ryou. |
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