| "Hearts together worlds apart" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: animeluver11 On: August 05, 2012 22:27 EDT
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OMG OMG OMG it was sooooooooo good PLEASE UDATE I BEG OF YOU |
Reviewed By: Jayn On: April 15, 2008 00:55 EDT
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I enjoyed the story so far! There weren't too many mistakes and I always like read stories such as this one. I hope you come back onto Mediaminer soon so that you can write more! You can't simply tease us with a reference to the next chapter with posting it! I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Goldenfightergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 23:01 EST
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You really need to write some more. I want to know what happens. I hope it turns out okay. I soo like you story please write more
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Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 18:46 EST
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Nice update ^^ I loved it ... but it's such suspense! *dies of suspense* omg. I'm looking forawrd to another update, and I knbow that when I do get one, I won't be dissapointed.
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 17:48 EST
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I like the story a whole bunch ^^ Gimme another update, or I'll steal your toaster! HA! I'm so funy ... *ahem* so, yes ... please, I am begging you to update ^.~ ::+:: wOOt ::+::
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Reviewed By: Calico Avangi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 19:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, not bad! Cute story so far (I've only read the first 2 chapters). Keep up the good work. Oh, just one thing: The guy's name is Krillin, not Quillin.
-Calico |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 19:59 EST
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He! He! Keep writing! I just looovvveee Veggie's driving! LOL! Anyway, that was awesome, so ROCK ON JESSELLE! (Erm...I think I had way too many pixi stix o_0) |
