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Reviewed By: cool On: February 15, 2003 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it heero?
Bold Tell me is there an arc in the makeing? You are so f***ing good that you sould go pro!!! |
Reviewed By: Homicidal Maniac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
seeing how i'v been reading this since you first posted, i think i can freak out right now. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! who said that?! *sobs* you MUST right more. |
Reviewed By: duokitty On: February 15, 2003 13:33 CST
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AHHHHHHHHHHH, that is sooooooo evil. But I think I know whose voice that is. Like I guessed a few chapters ago.
You must update A.S.A.P |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 03:33 CST
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Evil Cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!! How could you??????
AAAAAAAAaahhhhhhhhh, I'm going to toture you until you have finished the next chapter. Understand me???? Args. Hurry up, girl. I want some action. |
Reviewed By: Fys On: January 21, 2003 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it that you portray Duo as an intelligent person.. I've only read up to the fifth chapter but I'm definitely going to finish reading the rest of the chapters today (or what's left of today anyway...) =) Well, keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Deb On: January 14, 2003 22:21 CST
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hmmm, I am wondering who that is that has been watching duo? Could heero still be alive? and fake his own death? or am I miss reading about someone watching him???
I like this fic. can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 04:40 CST
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Well, I'm glad that Duo didn't rape Zechs. That was my first thought. Could have been a kind of revenge.
The sex-scene was great. *Don't touch my hair.* Sigh, is that wound ever going to heal? As Duo said, one love of my life and it is never going to happen again. Hope that doesn't break Zechs heart. Or did Zechs just wanted to have sex, too? Don't think so.
The line: *I would hate to hurt a friend.* puzzles me a little. Duo considers Zechs still to be a friend????? I hope that Zechs is succesfull in making Duo eat more and sleep better. |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 04:38 CST
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Teaching Quatre swearwords? How could you. And Trowa and Wufei smiling at that? Naw, never. Though, would be nice to see their reaction if Quatre would swear. gigle.
Awaikend by sweet Duos singing. Must have been quite a shock for Zechs. Wonder what he was dreaming about. giggle. NO, I don't wonder, lol, having seen Duo bouncing around nekied and showing of his tatoos, it must be absolutly obvious about what sexy Zechs would be dreaming. giggle
WWHAAaahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, Duo is giving him a massage? Split personallity I might say. Wasn't it just some hours ago he beat the shit out of poor Zechs?
Ups, remind me to never get on Quatres bad side. weeeeow. Just read his little speech to Une. Did he really say: bitch? Yes, he did. eeks. |
Reviewed By: cool On: December 24, 2002 00:31 CST
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duo's b-day is june 15 I have seen it on many web pages! |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 04:39 CST
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OOOKkkaayyy. I miss some action.
What about the watch? Didn't Duo forget it at the hospital and suddenly it is back? Did Une out a tracer in it? The thing with the camera was mean, but so was everything else.
And Heero did get killed on purpose? He planned for himself to get killed? I can't believe it. That boy really is stupid. No, not stupid. He is .... (imagine lots and lots of bad words at this place).
Someone give Duo a big hug. Sniff.
Wait, feeling nothing? Oh oh. That doesn't sound good. Is he going to be like Heero? No emotions, no feelings, just feeling empty and living for missions? Write faster!!!!!!!!!!!11 |
Reviewed By: Bulma Jr. On: December 19, 2002 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love a vengeful Duo! Write more soon, I want Duo to kick some serious ass! |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 05:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe it. Heero let himself getting killed to make Duo work at his best? Wouldn't it have been enough to get seriously injured or something?
I guess Une, Sally and Zechs are worried because of a reason. Is Duo going to kill them? After all, it seemed to be Heeros idea as well. Mmhh.
But the main question will be: Is Duo going to live after he had his revenge or will he die in the end?
You know what? I'd be more than pleased if you let me know when you update.
felidae@osnanet.de |
Reviewed By: Heaven On: December 11, 2002 18:07 CST
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oh..please write more..I love the way you weave the emotions in the story. It's so touching. |
Reviewed By: Nanashi-chick [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 23:24 CST
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Way cool. I honestly love your story. Please do more. |
Reviewed By: Asayake On: February 20, 2003 16:56 CST
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Cool chapter! The only thing it lacked was some closure, but I understand you're writing a sequel, so hopefully the whole Heero/Duo/Zechs thing'll get straightened out.
Aa... I feel sorry for Heero now ^^;. Just a little bit, he's just so... pathetic *evil grin*. Anywho, great story and three cheers for a sequel. :) |
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