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| "Some Way Back" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: March 07, 2003 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HHHHmmmmm,...soo there is gona be sequel Neeeee????...i guess it's safe to say that this sequel is gona be Fuuulllllll of Annnggggsstttttttt and more torment and tortured for poor duo,...but even more soo on heero Hmmmmmm,...*sssssiiggghhhh*....*shakes head*....
PPlleesseee,....i know what heero did was WWrrrooonggggg,...and might be unforgiven,...but still,...whatever ya might write next in the sequel,...DDDooon'ttt tortured hee-chan too much,...i mean,...i might sound bias cause heero IS my fav character and all,...but still,..all trough-out reading this great fic of yours,...i feel that ya've been bashing and bastardizing heero character WWaaayyyyyy too much,...at the rate ya're goin with this,...i think in the end,....heero might as well commit suicide or somethin,...the way i see it,..duo will NNeeeevveerrr,...and i think NNNeeeeveerrrr gona forgive heero,...EEEvverrrr,...and the rest of the pilots,..especialy sweet-cute-i-never-ever-done-any-wrong-or-mistakes-like-that-and-i-think-i'm-glad-i'm-born-with-an-emphatic-abilities-soo-i-won't-screw-up-like-that-but-i-might've-forget-that-not-everyone-can-be-an-emphath-like-me-but-heero-is-still-an-unforgiven-bastard-and-lets-all-damnn-him-trough-hell-Quatra,...Yeessss,...i'm not a big fan of quatra,...but the way ya make quatra in this really pisses-me-off,...like "look,..i'm sweet,and cute,...and NNeeeverrr gona be bad like heero does,.." way of his,...Maaannnnn,...like he never EVER done any mistakes in his life,...that "high-and-mighty" atitude of his really annoyed me,...
YYYeahhh heero betrayed them all,..and YYeeaahhhh it wrong to do soo,...but PPleaaseeee give the guy a break will ya,..like i'm tryin to say before,...NOT everyone can be born with emphatic abilities like he does,...and remember,...heero NEVER got the chance to understand human emotions,...untill he falls for duo,...but even then he still've troubles understanding them fully sometimes,...all the other pilots seems to love and cared for duo deeply,..cause to them,..duo seems to've more pain and misery in his life,...and they all try to give duo extra dose of love,understanding,care, and friendship-supports,...they seems to think that heero doesn't need all this,..cause heero seems much more stronger than duo,..but did any-
one of them ever realise that maybe heero is the one who needs all this more than duo ever did??...cause i think between these two,...heero is the more emotionaly fragile than duo,...heero might not show his emotions from the outside,...but inside he hurts deeply,...and he does feels deeply,...*sssiiigghhhhhh*...i'm sorry for goin-on-and-on-and-on about this,...just feels that i've to deffend heero character in here,...that's all,..and i think i did a bad job at it,...all in all,...great last chapter Arithkenshin-sama,...keep-up the good work kay,...looking foward to your sequel to this,..i've a feeling that in that sequel,...the pairing will not be 1x2 any longger Huhh???...at least in the end it will change right??...might turn into 2x6 or 2+6/6+2 right???...*ssssigghhhh*...all i can say is,...poor hee-chan,...[never-mine,...i still love ya anyway hee-chan,...*hugs heero-plush toy tightly*...no matter what everyone say or treated ya badly,...ya still've my support and love],..
till next time,...JJJaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaanbbaateeeeeee-Neeeee!!^.~!! | Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 13:28 CST
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please do another arc for the story!!! | Reviewed By: Shrty1016 On: March 01, 2003 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I cried, laughed and felt sorry for Duo...and Heero. I got lost in this story and could not stop reading it. So many emotions from such a small human, even for Duo it was rough. You kept me in suspense and I enjoyed a story that keeps me going, but I wish Duo would have taken him back...but thats for the sequel, which I am desperating waiting for. | Reviewed By: Bulma Jr. On: February 20, 2003 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Gundam Wing stories on this entire site. Keep up the good work and I can't wait until the sequel. | Reviewed By: cool On: February 20, 2003 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes that would make an arc and hope that your website is just as great as this story! Can have the addy? | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: February 19, 2003 21:22 CST
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WWWWeeeelll FFuuckk-it,....what the hell is goin on here??...WWWhyyyy did heero do that????...seems heero just better pack-up himself and go far,far..FFFaaaaarrrr away from everyone,...cause it seems that he's not gona be welcome in their lives anymore after this shit,...heero better forget of ever wanting duo to forgive him,..or love him still,...cause after this latest fuck-up he's done,...duo or the rest of the teams won't wana see his face EEEvverrrrr again,...if i were him,..i would hightail-myself out of there,...AAAAwaayyyyyy from the earth and colonies alikes,....OOhhhh for maybe a few thousands years or soo,...ya better mark this fic from now on as;3+4+5,[past]1+2+1,..and future 2+6/6+2,[seeing that zecy seems good-enough-strees-relief-fuck for duo taste]...or whoever-else duo deems good-enough-for-stress-relief-fuck OC,..etc,etc,etc....[no hard feelings kay,just my personal oppinions on this current-new-chapters]...all in all,..another intresting new chapter,..[even though abit too much heero-bashing for my taste,..*shrugs*]...keep-up the good work,...till yer-next chapter,...Jaaaaaaaa and GGaaanbbbaateeeeee-Neeeeeeeee!!^.~!! | Reviewed By: lead7girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!! Heero is ALIVE? I had the itch in the back of my head since the beginning, but I just thought I was crazy. ;o)
Your portrayal of Duo and the others is EXCELLENT! They are still the strong guys I love, but human, with human problems and emotions. I am really looking forward to seeing the direction you take the story now that Heero is back. How will his relationship with Duo and the other guys pan out? Only you know ;o) so I guess I will just have to anxiously wait, biting my nails and checking everyday for a new chapter.
Your creativity and writing style are impressive. I only wish I had the talent to write, but since I don't, I will just continue to enjoy yours! | Reviewed By: Dreamweaver On: February 17, 2003 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgot to mention one thing. I think Duo needs to stay with the Preventers 'cause he really needs them as an outlet of sorts. Heero doesn't. | Reviewed By: Dreamweaver On: February 17, 2003 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep Duo alive! As far as the storyline goes, I think it should stay 1x2 but Heero's got a long hard road ahead of him first. Let Duo GIVE HIM HELL in the process. Heero needs to take a LOT of flak from Duo and do a lot of kneeling and "floor-scraping". I also think that Duo should stay w/Preventers but Heero needs to find another line of work at least. At the base of things, I don't think Duo would even consider acknowledging Heero's presence if there were even the slightest chance that Heero might be in a position where he'd be tempted to do it again.
Heero's work methods, personality, and ways of looking at things/people needs a serious overhaul. | Reviewed By: Asayake On: February 17, 2003 16:49 CST
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I just read your fic (yes the whole thing, binge reading is my specialty) and I am stunned. I like the way you portrayed Duo. I don't like it when ppl make him really weepy. Quatre too (I almost started laughing when he said "Oh good!" in this last chapter).
Your angst is really good! This story really threw me for an emotional loop, especially this last chapter. I hope Sally, Une, and especially Heero get what they deserve (Zechs is _somewhat_ exempt in my eyes.), and Duo doesn't end up seriously hurt.
I think I've rambled on long enough. I try not to do 'I love your story, update soon!' like everyone else, but I do love this story and I will try to wait for the next part. (I know how life is :)
Sake-chan | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: February 17, 2003 08:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HHHHHmmmmmm,...i've been following this fic for quite some time now,...but never tried to leave reviews before now,...because i'm an avid fan of 1+2+1 and looking that heero died in this makes me feels kinda sad and sometimes i even skip reading it because of that,...i'm NOT a big fan of 2+6/6+2,...and this fic got that pairing,...and maybe that's part of the reason too for me to sometimes skip it,...only one question though;WWWWhhhooo is that voice in the last part???...is it heero???...but he's dead right???....or is he????...AAAArrrggggg ya've to continue soon,...a lots of fans of this fic of yours're DDDDyyyyiinnggggg to know what's gona happen next,....[including me of course,..*wink*]...keep-up the good work kay,...till next chapter,...Jaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGGGaaaaanbbbaaaateeeeee-Neeeeeee!!^.~!! | Reviewed By: Homicidal Maniac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took me 4 days to read this story.. and holy hell its awesome. update ASAP! need some more of duo freakin out, i get all emotional . and some killing…lots of blood.. he should forget his pill’s or something.. O.o well anyway.. I hope you got something up in ur head, and I’ll bet its good. Good luck with writing, I’ll be running by soon. | Reviewed By: cool On: February 13, 2003 05:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did duo remeber is pills? Update :-) I can not wight for more! Help me, this story is the first thing I think of every morning and the last thing I think of every nite
May your computer never fail and is there a a second part of this arc? | Reviewed By: cool On: February 15, 2003 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it heero?
Bold Tell me is there an arc in the makeing? You are so f***ing good that you sould go pro!!! | Reviewed By: Homicidal Maniac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
seeing how i'v been reading this since you first posted, i think i can freak out right now. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! who said that?! *sobs* you MUST right more. | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] |
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