Reviewed By: Sterling_Ag On: December 17, 2002 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good story, thanks for sharing. Interesting and pretty believable concept. This actually could be a decent start to a longer fanfic. The idea you have for your original character is pretty good but could stand some character developement. Unless you're just planning on using "Reiko" for a character foil.
Warmest Regards,
Brian |
