| "Stranger, Sister, Daughter" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I'd love 2 read more! Don't list 2 those other people wo reviewed before me. Their just idiots and if they want 2 argue with that then they can email me. I thought it was a grat fic because it has originality, and because it was a Tenchi/Ranma x-over fic. What I want 2 know is, do the tenchi girls switch over 2 ranma? And if so, put Ryoko with Ranma! I think she needs a break. And put Ryoga with Ayeka. I don't really like her. And when Tenchi, if he ever does, put him with Washu! Ja ne, oh and I tell my friends about this fic! silversaori@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: kiki On: March 11, 2003 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the fic |
Reviewed By: terryie On: February 14, 2003 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kasumi and Sasami together, a double dose of extra goodness. Bad behavior doesn't stand a chance with them working together.
This is progressing nicely and has been fun reading. I hope your next chapter is soon. |
Reviewed By: FTFCHRIS On: December 22, 2002 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm.... the style... is average... doesn't really give me that feeling of wanting to read more...
the only reason that i did read all the chapters and enjoyed them was because of Sasami.... you don't see many crossovers with her as one of the main chracters...
err... the end though killed it.... Akane..??... *shakes head* |
Reviewed By: Brian On: December 17, 2002 11:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Simple, sweet, some WAFF but not at overwhelming levels. Some quibbles: 'Nerima' is what I usually see, not 'Nermia'; and it seems somewhat plausible that the Tendos would allow Sasami to overnight at the dojo for a few days, but the story seems to have Sasami staying an indefinite period, which strains my belief. |
