| "Hold On" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: golbatgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 01:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I like it. I read your "The Prince's Plan" and "Hold On" one right after the other and this would be kind of perfect (if you rewrite this one a little) together. Love your stories! Now get to work and finish Slave!!!!
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Reviewed By: el corazon sangriento On: July 11, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome. very romantic, i've never seen such a soft side of vegeta in a fanfic before.
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Title: As i wait. (dont know what to put) lol
Reviewed By: Who knows On: May 03, 2005 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I really relly like your story. Most stories may have a good chapter or 2 but i would say out of 41 39 of your chapters were awsome. The other 3 were still good though. I cant wait till Vegate finds bulma again. Hint hint lol. That meens write faster lol. Well i like your story because you dont know whats going to happen but in a scence you have a felling that somin bad or good is going to happen. Keep it going. I also like you because u stick to a story like this one. Most give up after awhile. So i must say you are the best writer on this site. Congrats. I love this story.
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Title: AIIGHT YOU AIGGHT
Reviewed By: REDICULOUSLY_GOODLOOKING On: November 20, 2003 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIZZ OHHH MAN THESE KINDA FAN FICZ TAKE US BY STORM PLEASE COMPLETE MORE FANFICS BECAUSE THAT WUDD BE REALLY GOOD LIKE **KEWL !!!!! HAHA KEEP IT UP...
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: October 05, 2003 16:10 CDT
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Hehe...disreguard that. I found it...my mistake. I hate blond moments. = ) Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: October 05, 2003 16:01 CDT
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Hey, what happened to your fic, Slave? That was a great fic, and I would like to continue reading it, but, but it's gone, not here. What's up with that? Please let me know what happened to it. Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: Aggie7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 17:09 CDT
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aww that was so nice!!!! i like vegeta this way....sincere....u gotta write more stories like this....they're incredible!!!!!!
keep it up!!!
Aggie7 |
Reviewed By: Abby On: February 10, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an excellent writer! I love all your stories! |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwww, that was sweet. I think he does love her, but he's just afraid and is unsure. ^_^ |
