| "Ash's Awakining" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: thelovemutt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 09:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it's not very plausable, and you could take more time explaning things, but the grammar and sentence structure are good, and the only spelling mistake I noticed was a mistaken homophone. And I'm so loving James. |
Reviewed By: Shader On: December 25, 2002 20:05 CST
Comment/Review:
GODDAMITT YOU ARE FUCKING PERVERT. I READ THE ONE WHEN ASH RAPED JESSE TOO. GODDAMMIT LEARN TO WRITE MAYBE READ BLACK DOVES THAT WAS GOOD WITH THE ANGSTY AND SLIGHT HENTAI. GOD YOUR A SICK MOFO WHO NEEDS TO GO IN THE INSANE ASYLUM. |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the fuck is your damage? That was some shit I did NOT want to see, hear, or read.
And what's this about "accidentally" putting this on pg? You sick bastard. |
Reviewed By: no ash dont no [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 01:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sercer this makes me so hot and horny mabey we can get together some time for some S&M after reading your work of art i want to take your man meat and do bad things with it |
Reviewed By: Pistoffveemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 19:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Dragon Warrior, Sercer, stop, you're BOTH sick fuckers! |
Reviewed By: reader On: December 06, 2002 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
and this was in PG!!! lol i wonder how many poor kids will get theropy..... |
Reviewed By: Dragonwarrior84 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You fucking Dumbass look what you started I will kick your ass for that email I will send you a time and a place and i will beat you into a coma
Dont worry you fans of my fics i will email you the location if your review has a email addy |
Reviewed By: Baby T On: December 05, 2002 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dragonwarrior84 is right! That is disgusting and I can't believe you acually put it on Pg! What is your problem!? |
Reviewed By: kevin On: December 05, 2002 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really nasty but thats how i like it. |
Reviewed By: Dragonwarrior84 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Man or women known as Sercer is a no tallent hack who can only write to scare small childern that is why his new pokemon fic was on pg for several hours clearly its a nc17 fic what kind of a sick deprived fuck are you? you are nouthing but a pervert and can fuck off when it comes to my excellent writing I write Fics 100 percent better than you I may Misspell my writing sometines but thats because im trying to bring my fics in as fast as i can so my readers can be happy.and I dont have to be as sick as you to do it Bitch |
Reviewed By: Sercer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 09:50 CST
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