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| "Ash's Awakining" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: Oro? On: May 09, 2004 18:53 CDT
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First of all: You sick freak. Second of all: Good vocabulary. Third of all: What the hell was the deal with you and dragonwarrior? He seemed a litle obsessed, whereas you weren't. Fourth of all: Your fics are better than his. He writes out of anger and revenge. You? You right for the shear fun of it, although the story was sick. Overall rating: ***/****
| Reviewed By: Oro On: May 09, 2004 18:50 CDT
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| Reviewed By: Pickle_Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 16:31 CDT
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That was the most disgusting thing I ever read.......whens the next chapter??
| Reviewed By: yomofo On: March 10, 2004 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol man I have respect for someone like you that's jsut fuckin hilarious that it got on the PG page you rule I don't care what any of those other fucks said about you
| Title: hey its me again...
Reviewed By: Patches vs Sercer On: December 27, 2003 04:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah.... that shit is crazy, DRAGONWARRIOR LOVES THE ANAL! i swear i have turrets syndrom cause everytime im in the middle of saying somet--HE WANTS THE LIMO IN HIS TRUNK!--damnit... i give up okay so, you need to add your little hit and run explination on your next fan fic... about how you see a bomb ass chick (misty)-- YAY kirby dance! -- and u start jerking it and before you explode, you run up to her, push up her skirt, shove it in, KABOOM! then u run (only lasting the next 10 feet as you fall on ur face for lack of energy.... yeah okay ... DRAGON WARRIOR IS STILL A FAT FUCK!
| Title: Hit and Run...
Reviewed By: Patches vs Sercer On: December 27, 2003 04:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF IS THIS SHIT, YOU STUPID MOTHER FUCKING CUNT LICKING PEICE OF SHIT, IM SURE THAT YOU WROTE THIS STORY FROM FIRST HAND EXPERIENCE!!! JAMES ISNT JUST A CHARACTER IN UR FUCKING STORY U BITCH, THATS YOU! YOU ARE ALL ABOUT THE NUMB NUTS AND THE TOUCH OF A MANS PENIS. YOU SICK PERVERTED LITTLE BITCH... --DragonWarrior is a lil flamming homo (just had to say that... sorry back to my insults)-- YOU ARE SO FUCKING HOMO EROTIC FOR WRITING THIS SHIT, YOU SHOULD BE DRUG OUT BACK, SHOT, STABBED, DROWNED IN WATER, ELECTRICUTED, SHOT AGAIN, HAVE UR DAMNED NUTS CUT OFF, AND FORCE FEED YOU THEM, HANG YOU, STAB YOU SOME MORE, SHOVE A STICK UP YOUR ASS, AND HANG YOU BY YOUR SALAMI. well, i guess you aren't that bad, after all you are one hell of a counter-strike player. and im not that much better than you for saying the things i did... but really now... you must be a fucking cock sucking bitch... but even if thats the case, im sure DragonWarrior sucks more dicks than you. he loves the cock so much when he goes to the mariners game with his boyfriend mark he order's the foot long dogs, just to make his *cought* 'partner' jelious... that fat fuck doesnt know shit about writing fan fics... i saw his page on the forum listing, and i thought to myself: is it worth reading something a gay fat man who likes the cock wrote... no its not sercer you know why?.. cause urs was by far the best shit i ever read, i fell on the floor holding my side so i wouldnt explode from laughter, that was some awesome shit... ash tought that mother fucker pikachu whos boss! oh man... --Gozzirra-- hmmm yeah, can't wait to read the one where i sleep with misty, fuck her all over she sucks my balls and then in the morning i fuck her again, shower up, walk to ur house, debate weather or not to shoot you, and if i choose not to then drag ur ass to DragonWarrior's house and do that list of shit to him and then some, maybe you and i can get marshmellows throw them on some fire pokers stand 30feet away from that faggot and roast some mellows...mmmm i do like them mellows... anyways, what im saying is ur a stupid mother fucker, wait no... ur a goddamned genius, DragonWarrior still sucks... wow its getting hot in here... *looks out his window* THE FAT MAN LEARKS NEAR... im melting, melting... hmmm, maybe i should go to that place where the squrrels run free, the walls are my friends, all 42 of them in my 4 wall bedroom, with 6foot thick white padded interrior, that jacket that ties your arms back as i lay back and pretend im in heaven, when really im twitching because i am insane... which i am starting to really beleive, shit man i want to eat a burrito... maybe have some more pie or something, well anywho... i must be heading to canada, nail some hookers or some shit... well hope to visit you so we can roast those mellows on Chunky-Butts fat ass!
| Reviewed By: trik On: October 17, 2003 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your fic ashes awakening. write a second chapter soon
| Reviewed By: Luna On: August 02, 2003 04:40 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!! The poor children who read this SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL | Reviewed By: Luna On: August 02, 2003 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
FUCK! This is so fucked up! I laughed my ass of! You really can't write! hahahahaha... this sucked so bad! I almost died when I read the reviews you got! You all are fucked up!!!!!!! LMAO | Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 02:46 CDT
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I'm just putting this here because I wish to retract my previous statement. That was beautiful. You scare me more than I scare myself. Oh, and DRAGONWARRIOR84 is a BITCH. Fuckin' ho. This guy can't write for shit. When he referred to his fans above, he was talking about his boyfriend and father(same guy). | Reviewed By: Warlocked3 On: July 05, 2003 16:01 CDT
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just kidding, im a guy.
(")> ^(")^
KIRBY DANCE PARTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Warlocked3 On: July 05, 2003 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I;m sorry Sercer I accidentaly dissed you on your piece about whether or not to continue. I had no Idea that you wrote this fic. YOU ARE WAY BETTER THAT THAT FUCKING Dragonwarrior84!!!!! I told this story to all of my friends and they loved it and got really horny. (by the way im a girl=^-^=) | Reviewed By: The Demon Lord of Panda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 23:34 CDT
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dude, you're scary. and I have no clue how this can "accidentally" be PG. This deserves to be rated "f" for completely fucked. Ehm.... I've read a LOT of bad fics (hell, I search for them. They give me shits kicks and giggles when I'm bored) but damn. This wasn't bad or stupid this was just FRIGHTENING. I guess I can simply say this: you're very brave for taking all your flames. I could never take flames, but then again: I don't write crazed shit like this. Whatever. To each his own, and yeah.... this is.... your area..... | Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 15:48 CDT
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What the hell is your problem you are in need of seriose help! | Reviewed By: Taslan On: January 20, 2003 04:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now im very open minded to all fan fics i do enjoy the adult fanfiction but hey thats just me
Style of writting was exclent and had good sentence struture
Spelling and grammer as for as i can see had no mistakes
It was very orginal
Eh i didnt enjoy it much since that which was written wasnt my cup-o-tea
Overall it was an ok fanfiction
I am not an idoit who says Omg this is so nasty fuck u little blah blah
I respect everyones abbilty to write what they write and so on I will not demean anyone just beacuse of something they wrote
But please do be carefull next time on the rating though it is fixed as I can see | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] |
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