| "The Saiyan Graduate" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: EvilleVonRandom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! That fic. was so cool! You should update it even though it hasn't been done for 4 years.
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Title: Um, are you done?
Reviewed By: Carla121 On: November 28, 2004 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...is this it? I like it so far, but you kind of left us hanging. I mean, is this all or is there more? I saw that you hadn't updated in 2 years, but still, this seems a bit unfinished to me.
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Reviewed By: Princess Timbrel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv you're story but I'm not so fond on how you did Mrs.Briefs. I like her!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 23, 2003 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear, TIna...I didn't think I'd like this...and I didn't like it...I LOVED it. You must continue!!! It's fantastic! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 02:08 CST
Comment/Review:
ohhh cliff hanger.... hope everthing works out with v/b keep posting ^_^ |
Reviewed By: liza On: January 22, 2003 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma's mom is such a ho! Hate her and Veggie together. EW! But love the story! |
Reviewed By: AnimeScholaress88 On: December 28, 2002 09:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was incredible. What will happen next? You should continue this fanfic if you have the time. Your spelling is aliitle off but everybody can't be perfect. Write back to me at: trinhcongwin@msn.com You kinda remind me of me.
AnimeScholaress88 |
Reviewed By: Yuffie lockheart On: December 26, 2002 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is sooo damn good! especially the story backround!! please!! please!! please continue this great story!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*he he he* I LOVE that song!! XD
*singing*
Here's to you, Mrs. Robinson. Jesus loves you more than you will know. Oh-wo-wo-whoa!!
This is just such a GREAT idea that I can't WAIT to see where you go with it! ^_~
Um ... my only "constructive" comment is that the beginning/background info is rushed. *shrugs* But that's just me.(realizes that this IS only chapter1 and more will come!) NO, I didn't want a V/MrsBreifs lemon. *shudders* I think I'll wait for the V/B, thank you. :)
She's been with ALL of them!?!?! (I'm suddenly noticing similarities between your Mrs.Breifs and your description of ... your sister. *sweatdrops*) *drops dead*
*a sudden thought, revives her*
He conveniently forgot to promise not to be receptive to any seduction attempts Bulma directed at him, however.
*claps* Yay!! I'm SO glad you added that line! ^_~ Go Veggie, he's our man! If he can't do her, no one can!!! *lol* Keep it up, Tina!! |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: December 05, 2002 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll admit that I was shocked about what to expect, but curiosity got the better of me. Pretty good so far so keep up the good work! |
