| "No Restraint" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Nova On: March 31, 2003 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting an intriquing storyline. Please continue. I have already printed off the existing chapters and added them to my permenant collection. Impatiently waiting, Nova |
Reviewed By: Skyeshadow On: February 13, 2003 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely. I like the premise, and the characters are three-dimensional- they have motives and secrets and PERSONALITIES!!! Write the next chapter soon, please. |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL!!! An awesome premise, and deft execution!!! A delight to read. Awesomly angsty...Schu is such a bastard, and yet...the last scene in Protector...he was almost...ALMOST tender with poor lil Kenken.
I am very much looking forward to more of this fic...now if you please!!!
Talon |
