| "Alarums and Excursions" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Jewelle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyla, I just found this archive and your story...Its Good! ... although I was disappointed to find it not completed and that almost a year has passed since chapter 9 was uploaded (if I'm reading this archive correctly). I do hope you are still writing this story and will eventually post the ending. ^_^ Again I was really enjoying this story. If you are still writing this ... Any chance of Haan trusting the 5 pilots with his secrets? If you aren't still writing this story for whatever reason would you please let me know...so I can stop hoping and let me down easy? ^_- spritegremlin@ sbcglobal. net Thanks
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Title: Ebony Wing
Reviewed By: Ebony Wing [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 04:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is GOOD!!!!! Write more, Write more, Write more, Write more, Write more, Write more!!!!!! Please?
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Reviewed By: Tran On: December 30, 2002 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had a very interesting plot line as well as fantastic writing! I hope you continue soon! Great job! |
Reviewed By: Tobe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that this story is really interesting and that I think you should finish it NOW. Cuz it's really good. Well keep it up!
Tobe |
