| "Night out" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: razile [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved reading this, please right more, oh and don't worry, I know who graham norton is :)
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Reviewed By: Explosivo On: June 23, 2003 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I probably could have brought those ratings down, but I love this story too much to care. I really enjoy the Metal Gear Games, so I was glad to see a silly story such as this one. I couldn't stop laughing. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Scarbie On: June 18, 2003 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this chapter was really strange. I'm not familiar with the show they were on, but it sounds worse than Jerry Springer.
Snake flirting with Otacon's stepmother was funny (though he probably should be cussing her out). Fatman's tirade was hilarious, "I've got more chins than a chinese phonebook." *lol* |
Reviewed By: Scarbie On: June 18, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, very funny. Snake knows he's wrong for sneaking on public transportation.
I think my favorite line in the first chapter is:
Otacon: Snake have you ever thought the only reason you don't get noticed in a box is because no-one would believe anyone could be that stupid, and so they think they must be going insane.
That is so true. |
