| "Detention" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 19:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
shame you didnt continue this, bakura, ryo,malik, and marik are fastly becoming my fav charaters
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Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems like the end...but it's good enough to call it one. Good fic for an "incomplete". I don't believe I've said that before ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
aww..but you said it wasnt the end~!!
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Title: Drool
Reviewed By: Tanja On: October 24, 2006 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*droool* I think it was HOT!!!!
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Reviewed By: animepunk44 On: September 29, 2005 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was soooo cute. ^^ i almost cried. this is defenitly one of my fave fics now. :P Font Color
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: February 24, 2005 15:07 CST
Comment/Review:
rrr, *attempts to steal your marvalous writing skills* You're really one of the best writers I know, so sweet, good thing the creep died
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Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Just beautiful. Although your spelling and grammar were a little off, other than that, this fic was B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 01:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mmmmm, lemony goodness... good thing that creep died! Too bad you decided to end this fic, it would have been interesting to see where this relationship went. *sigh* Oh well, nothing I can do about it, right? So, off to find another story to read...
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery On: April 25, 2004 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing, it seems to flow perfectly, please continue soon
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Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: November 12, 2003 09:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story! I can't wait to read the next part! Please continue soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: al On: September 23, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u just made this my favorite pairing or group or whatever this is called. i'm going to review a lot
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Reviewed By: firebirdy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 21:47 CST
Comment/Review:
very cool. |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 00:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the next chapter! I'll be watching!! *winks* And it's a really good ficcy, too!!
Ja! |
Reviewed By: Nkoah On: December 18, 2002 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The storyline and the description you use is just great! This story is soooo sexy! Please keep going ^_^!!!! |
Reviewed By: Yumei On: December 12, 2002 00:10 CST
Comment/Review:
x.x; oops...I must have accidentally clicked 9 on the last two instead of 10! |
Reviewed By: Yumei (sorry, I have no idea how to sign back in) On: December 12, 2002 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^; A few typos, but it's so great!! Nee...and I hope everyone's feelings get resolved!! *glomp* please continue!
~Yumei |
Reviewed By: Yami Girl On: December 10, 2002 17:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it. But poor Ryou. But i guess it is right up there for what i did to him. ^_^. but any way i can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 10, 2002 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it and I can't wait for more. I wish you would add Keora or
Yama in their practically the most mismatched hikari/yami group you would meet. |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 12, 2002 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it Shadow and I can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Jess On: December 08, 2002 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is one of the saddest stories. I feel so bad for Ryou. more please i want to know what happens... poor ryou... |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 08, 2002 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it and I can't wait for next chapter. You could make Yama and Keora enter.
Yama has a sense of justic that is elavated way part justice. |
Reviewed By: DarkMagician On: December 07, 2002 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE must have more. Great fanfic Make that bastard of a teacher pay for taking away his innocence. Make Him trust Bakura and Malik. Make him tell them. Then have um kill the son of a bitch teacher.No one should have to go thru that especilally not Ryou. DIE youdamn teacher DIE |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great! this is a kool combo. more! ryou-chan and bakura-kins so kawaii!^^ |
