| "Bow to the Prince" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Title: Great Fic
Reviewed By: Lizzy4877 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome oneshot. You captured the characters perfectly. You should consider making this into a chp. fic, if you did from what I've read of it so far if would be absolutely wonderful. *Liz*
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 17:12 CDT
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I didn't know this fic existed! Thanks so much for reposting it! What a wonderful 1-shot and Vegeta is perfect, almost "extra" seme in the sense he's in some kind of flaunting-it battle mode. Goku sexy as hell in his indecision--if that one's not in battle, he's so easily brought to his knees! Wow, wonderful--you should write more yaoi! debbiechan
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Title: It had to be you!!
Reviewed By: Blue Siren ( I love you too MM) On: January 04, 2004 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I read this a while ago but didn't review it. I liked it then and I like it more now the second time I read it. Oh and I don't feel alone anymore ;)... where's the Phantom's review?
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Reviewed By: yemil vegaits [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wowie *really, really big, stupid grin* That was awwweeesommmee!!!! ^_____^ What a cool lemon! I've read lots like it...but this was was really, really good. I enjoyed it lots!!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Maraudergirl86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 22:23 CST
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Heh, that was interesing to read... Poor Goku... You know, I can't really figure out if it was technically rape or not... Kakarotto seems to be always changing his opinions! *confused* Good work! I like your style of writing...
By the way...
I'm Freda Potter *winks*[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Shade_Knight_A [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You defentaly make it belivable.LOL Great job Am.
You would do well to keep on improving as you have though all of your writing and become a true athor who assends the bounds of Fanfiction.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Veresti [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 15:05 CST
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First attempt at yaoi? I'd say you've done a pretty good freaking job of writing it for it being the first time. Well, I have to go soon, and I'm trying to get everything done before I do, so I'll have to cut this short. See you later AM![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: atshi On: December 10, 2002 12:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nicley done *smirks*[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2002 11:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved "Third class warrior first class whore", and "But in your weakness I have found my strength." I should just see Vegeta saying that. Love the Picture too![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2002 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow AM!!!!! Excellent fic!! Great characterization...you did as good a job with Vegeta as you did with Goku!! I can really imagine him being like that with Goku, the sexy little sods. : ) I'll be reading this again for sure.....MORE PLEASE!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Klara_usually_in_flares On: December 09, 2002 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
.....*wipes away drool* omg... This is damn good yaoi! You've kept them in character really well.
Goku was so damn innocent and doe-eyed.... *sighs*[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 04:32 CST
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Mmmmmmm. Love Vegeta preying on an exhausted Goku. Purr!
I would, uh, say more, but my brain is all mushy. ^_^[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: G-jin On: December 08, 2002 16:20 CST
Comment/Review:
more! please write more! I love Vegeta being dominant! Just please write more! This can't be the end![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 On: December 08, 2002 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG it was SOOOOO DELICIOUS!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!! ~sniff, sniff~ You even DEDICATED it to me, the evil slave driver!! ~wipes away a tear~
It's SO refreshing reading a yaoi work where Vegeta is the dominant, AS HE WOULD BE, and not a snivelling little feminized wimp!! I think this is one of the best that I've read at keeping both Vegeta and Goku in character. Just brilliant work, all the way!!
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Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 11:19 CST
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O.O. Wooooooow.... This was one of the best V/G fics I've ever read! Fantastic job! I don't know what else I can say besides that! I hope to read more of your addicting work soon! *goes to re-read the fic*[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was brutal but delicious. I'm definitely a fan of Vegeta being dominant; he is seme in all my fics except one, and that's not out yet. The "third class warrior but first class whore" line was excellent. Your writing is very clear and concise, and your characterizations were very, very good indeed. We need more yaoi from you!!! *spork*[ Request Review Removal ] |
